MANY PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT IT IS VERY IMPORTANT TO MAKE LARGE AMOUNTS OF MONEY, WHILE OTHERS ARE SATISFIED TO EARN A COMFORTABLE LIVING. ANALYZE EACH VIEWPOINT AND TAKE A STAND. GIVE SPECIFIC REASONS FOR YOUR POSITION.
It is a big question about how to live right and what is a goal of our existence. Everybody in his life thought about it. We manage our life and there is one of philosophy questions about necessity of earning big amounts of money for happiness.
When people wish to earn large amounts of money they actually want the things which they can buy by this money. Among these things there is a big house near the ocean, a prestigious car, good clothes, qualitative techniques, rich furniture, jewelry and so forth. A wish to make large amounts of money can arise because of a need of responsibility also....
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