Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why
do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and
examples to support your answer.
MUSEUMS
Museums can be of many types like art, history, war, science, technology, etc. When people go to new places, they mostly visit the museums of that place. There could be several reasons why people do it.
First, people might visit museums because of their interest to know more about that new place. A museum preserves the culture, traditions, technology, history, etc of that specific place. Hence, if people want to know more about the new place, museum is a great place they could go to.
Second, people might be interested in specific museums. For instance, a guy who likes art would definitely visit an art museum or a guy who likes science would visit a science museum. So, sometimes specific museums attract people because of their personal interests.
Also, I think it is because when people travel, they mostly check the places worth seeing at those new places and museums would be definitely listed in it. For example, when my aunt and uncle went to Ho Chi Minh City on a holiday, their trip advisor advised them to visit the Ho Chi Minh City war museum. They weren’t specifically interested in visiting it. They just visited it on the suggestion of the trip advisor. Hence, some people visit museums just because they want to check all the places listed on the internet or as suggested by some trip advisor.
Thus, in my opinion, majority of the people visit museums because they want to know more about that place. Some people visit museums because of their interests and some others visit the museums just because they think that they have to visit every place in the list.
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...have to visit every place in the list.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'thus', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.275 0.229887763892 120% => OK
Verbs: 0.1375 0.158761421928 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.05625 0.0866891130778 65% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0375 0.046263068375 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.06875 0.0685040099705 100% => OK
Prepositions: 0.10625 0.118717715034 89% => OK
Participles: 0.015625 0.0351676179071 44% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.29800904554 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.028125 0.0309702414327 91% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.090625 0.0887237588012 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.025 0.0209618222197 119% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.01875 0.0139019557991 135% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1613.0 2387.08602151 68% => OK
No of words: 277.0 408.028673835 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82310469314 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.48200974243 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.339350180505 0.338922669872 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.231046931408 0.251872472559 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.12274368231 0.174417080927 70% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.057761732852 0.112833075102 51% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29800904554 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 212.727598566 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454873646209 0.524397521467 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 42.9031147464 59.2087087015 72% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 17.3125 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8166381375 48.84282405 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.8125 120.699889404 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3125 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6875 0.644075263715 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 40.4171931408 45.7405998639 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.62820512821 1.45489161554 112% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392658170939 0.300154397459 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.110851363903 0.103427244359 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.115592092334 0.0752933317313 154% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.565472766319 0.497263757937 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.155893595592 0.151897553556 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164510456831 0.114077575197 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103637384154 0.0781384742642 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.26359375655 0.336927656856 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.115978281678 0.067059652881 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260155747175 0.210909579961 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05344577774 0.0618886996521 86% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.