Many people welcome the opening of shopping areas near their homes. On the other hand, some people are strongly opposed to the construction of such facilities. If the opening of a large shopping center in your neighborhood were announced, would you support or oppose its construction? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
A large shopping center would bring great satisfaction and I would definitely go for its development as the reasons following in this article.
First of all, the opening of shopping centers would generate more jobs. The unemployee rate nearby is exponentially increasing and the construction of them would definitely bring peace to everyone. Besides, my neighbors would need to commute long distances to find a job. Thus, having shoppings around would bring many benefits.
Moreover, it would be a great entertainment area near me. It would not be necessary to drive far-reaching to look for pleasure. For example, a few years ago my cousin lived in the country side and there was absolutely nothing countermand him. Currently, his countryside location turned out to become a small city with small malls around him, therefore, he may go on feet for diversion.
Furthermore, it would be easy to go for shopping. For instance, my girlfriend loves shopping however we do not have any malls around us. If we want to buy clothes we have to travel long distance, far way from us, or go for shopping using the internet. With small halls around us, merely a small walk and we would be there.
Finally, everyone would be certainly satisfied with the advent of the malls because with it much pleasure would come.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 11.0286738351 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1087.0 1977.66487455 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 220.0 407.700716846 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94090909091 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79365795927 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631818181818 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 618.680645161 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5123072815 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6428571429 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7142857143 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 5.45110844103 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14889170061 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632653446962 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587837124499 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932413385355 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580697084551 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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