Many students choose to attend schools or universities outside their home countries. Why do some students study abroad? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Everyone has their own reasons to study abroad. I think students study abroad for a couple of reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, attending a school abroad may lead a better opportunity to find a high respected job than studying in home country. My own experience is a good example of this. When I was at university one of my classmates decided to drop off the school and go abroad to study. When I asked him what the reason was, he told me that attending a university abroad would help him to obtain a good job in the future, and he would also have a chance to meet with other foreign students that contribute to have a social network abroad. After all, when he returned to his country, he really enjoyed the education he got abroad and had a good job with an amazing salary in a high respected company. If he attended a university in his country, who knows may be there would be no chance to obtain this kind of a job.
Furthermore, learn new cultures by studying abroad. Young people think that, may be they can`t have a chance to go to abroad in the future so, they want to take the advantage of being a student and go abroad as a student. I can recall a friend from my high school. She wanted to know about Korean culture and the country itself. Just because she was curious about the Korean culture, she attended a university in Korea, and she had no problem about finances because she won a scholarship that there wouldn`t be such a thing if she was not a student.
Owing to the reasons mentioned above, I truly feel that students study abroad to have a good career and learn new cultures. I believe that whatever the reason is, students who studying abroad, have lots of advantages in this world than the students that study in their home country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, really, so, after all, i think, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46827794562 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48192046043 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492447129909 0.524837075471 94% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 4.0 0.994623655914 402% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4947416895 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0666666667 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25821440525 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101959936979 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757238048861 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193903576834 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629464810783 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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