Many students choose to attend schools or universities outside their home countries. Why do some students study abroad? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.
Studying abroad is a big responsiblity and have lots of problem. On the other hand The responsiblity is thought a positive effect on people's life and studying abroad changes people's life different aspects. I think positive sides are more weight than negative sides. I will explain two important reason why prefer to study abroad.
Firstly, when you go to far place to study, you have a chance to learn foreign language like native speaker and their culture. Reading book and internet source don't help enough to learn a language and culture. For example, I liked Spain in my childhood and I read most of book about spain and taken a Spanish course to learn that language. And then I went to Spain and stayed there along two years. First time when I arrive the country I surprised because everthing is different than I read and I didn't speak Spanish. It was hard to me but end of two years I have had good speaking ability and I liked more Spanish than before I went to the country. That's why Studying abroad is preffered.
Second the fact that, you could meet a lot of people in your studying time and you could be close to some of them. At the time you have a home in the country and if you come back your own country always you will be an option to go there because the place is like your second home. For example, when I came back to my country, I countinued to communicate with my Spanish friends. When I need a change I know that I go to my them and It feels me very good and relax.
In conclusion, Studying abroad is different experience because you have learning country and language and you have friends in the country. This mean is important to me. I think people should try this adventure If they have a option.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of problems'.
Suggestion: lots of problems
... abroad is a big responsiblity and have lots of problem. On the other hand The responsiblity is...
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...lture. Reading book and internet source dont help enough to learn a language and cul...
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Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...urprised because everthing is different than I read and I didnt speak Spanish. It wa...
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Suggestion: didn't
...verthing is different than I read and I didnt speak Spanish. It was hard to me but en...
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Suggestion: That's
...nish than before I went to the country. Thats why Studying abroad is preffered. Se...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a change I know that I go to my them and It feels me very good and relax. In c...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... should try this adventure If they have a option.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, so, then, for example, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42319749216 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39485712541 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495297805643 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 438.3 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3641180735 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3888888889 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7222222222 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38888888889 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104223210578 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401755708171 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600582012688 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0694245783165 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418821987517 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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