My reasons for going to the movies all the time.
I grew up in an artistic family where all my family members loved cinema and watching movies. That's why I've loved movies since childhood and later decided to study acting. I'm studying acting now and one of the most effective ways to success in this field is watching various movies at the cinema. In addition, without the presence of people in the cinema definitely, cinema and film making industry will fail. As you know, directors and filmmakers not only need our financial help but also going to the movies represents our interests and helps them to make better films.
First of all, as I mentioned above, I'm studying acting and this is the major reason that causes me to go to the movies more. It helps me to make progress. Although sometimes just for fun and interest to some famous actors I go to the cinema but most of the time due to my field of study and reviewing a specific movie I have to go to the movies over and over. However, I never feel bored and every time I see the large white screen of cinema I will be interested in cinema more than before. Therefore, I always go to the movies lovingly because watching different movies with different genres such as action, comedy, and drama helps me to improve in my field of study.
In addition, I believe that going to the movies motivates the producers to work with more passion and makes them don't worried about costs that they spend on a movie. Although some of the government agencies or private companies may pay a part of these expenses but a large portion of these costs will be compensated by the people who go to the movies. Furthermore, by going to the cinema we can demonstrate our interests to a movie and only in this way filmmakers can make more films compatible with our interests. Therefore, I also go to the movies thanks to supporting cinema and film making industry,
In conclusion, I go to the movies because it has a great impact on my success in my field of study. I will be familiar with different actors and directors. I believe going to the movies thanks to its large screen has a greater effect on me and makes me be a good actor in the future. In addition, It helps filmmakers to make more and better films proportional to people interests and without worrying about their costs. Thus, for these reasons, I go to the movies a lot and I really enjoy this work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, really, so, therefore, thus, in addition, in conclusion, such as, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50815850816 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47634962696 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452214452214 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 620.1 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6063137736 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.444444444 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61111111111 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349618172725 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106784965241 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0990548229516 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228746503771 0.150856017488 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103122375226 0.0645574589148 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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