Neighbors are the people who live near us. In you opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.
Different people may respond this question differently, because There is a wide range attitudes and interests among people. But if it comes to me, from my point of view, I think a good neighbor meet some important qualities. If I want to buy a apartment for living, it will be very important for me that my neighbors should be sufficiently appropriate as a people who are living near me. I will provide some personality parameters which can define a good neighbor.
One of the primary quality, that I think is very necessary is about life style. I think life styles a two family that want to live near each other should not be very different. Obviously, in many cases, differences in life styles and living manner could cause stress for each family. For example, consider two family, that first family is very small including a man and his spouse and the second one which including large numbers, furthermore, suppose that the second family usually have guests and have very crowded. This situation could be very annoying for the smaller family which has a high interest to read books in a very suitable place.
There is more subtle point which we should consider. Beside similarity between life styles. I thing neighbors should be very kind to each other. They should be act as a family. They must not be indifference about neighbors’ problems and difficulties. They should provide each other with kind support and consideration. For example, my brother was working in a company, after years, the company was collapsed and consequently, my brother suffered for weeks from unemployment. One of the my neighbors which had a position in a newspaper editioning office, offered my brother a good job with high income. I mean that, neighbors should not be indifference about each other and should put all their efforts in to practice to completely eliminate neighbors’ difficulties.
All in all, if two previous reasons are contemplated, I easily reach the conclusion that, a good neighbor should meet some necessary characteristics and qualities. Such as having similar life style, not being indifference about neighbors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, for example, i mean, i think, such as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05965909091 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93805356794 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517045454545 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.4946531823 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.05 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136121035812 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470687080559 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493264910176 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947491810548 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598565313594 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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