Never, never give up, means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree?
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that human beings put their efforts to experience success throughout history despite trials and tribulations in everyday life. Indeed, achieving success is one of critical utmost importance life goals that people bend over backwards to reach. Stemming from this fact a relevant question that is a moot point is whether people should make an effort constantly in order to be successful. Due to controversial nature of this question there is not a general agreement on this issue. I am, however, to a great extent of the conviction that not until people try hard for their goals can they make a progress day in day out. In the ensuing paragraphs some convincing reasons will be delineated to elaborate my personal stance.
To commence with, there is no doubt that human beings have multitude goals for their future life and hardly can they achieve them without being persistent. Generally phrased, life goals make people decide their path and being successful in their personal life. As a matter of fact, stop working and never keep trying might have deleterious effects on people's lives. For instance, according to a study conducted in my country, a plethora of people who have neglected their future life goals, ran into a huge and serious problem and overwhelmed by stress owing to the fact that life goals could guarantee people's success. To elucidate more on this issue, if human beings want to ensure their future life, they should make a plan and life goals and have a hard-working attitude to reach their goals.
Another reason that should not go unnoticed is that keep trying through hard working attitude provide an opportunity for people to enhance their self-confidence. To put it in other word, when people do not have any plan in their lives, they will suffer from paucity of self-esteem due to the fact that life without goals seem to be paralyzed and people could not keep their incentive to go on. Going into the depth, make plans and goals not only can develop people's confident but also provide fertile ground for people not to do something wrong. However, what was alluded to above can't be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the countless merits it has, indisputably, keep trying and never stop working might not be useful and effective due to the fact that crowds of goals need deep and precise thought. In fact, without thinking wisely and a sound decision hard working would be sheer waste of time. Nonetheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
In light of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that life goals are of utmost importance goals that could provide an opportunity for people to be successful and ensure their future life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 582, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nonetheless, so, for instance, in fact, no doubt, as a matter of fact, by and large, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2275.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 459.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95642701525 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5960760911 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496732026144 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 696.6 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.417481469 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.736842105 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1578947368 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63157894737 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111917721963 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446463036865 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697974238543 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715502609063 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053599494716 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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