Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In our current ever changing world the pace of life has become faster. In order to accordance of human being with this pace, people find some way to prepare food easier as well. Although the easier prepared foods take less time than before, they could not improve the way of living. There are three reasons why I have this idea.
First and foremost, most of these easy prepared foods are considered as fast food such as fried potatoes, burgers, pizzas which huge amount of oil are used to prepare them. Fast foods are count as the unhealthiest group of foods which despite the fact that they take less time to prepare than normal food, they give us less vitamin and protein which is necessary for our body. In addition these kind of food cause obesity especially in youths.
Another prominent reason that I advocate this issue is that fast foods or frozen foods, as an another way to make food faster, have very low quality or even have lots of disadvantages for our bodies; as a consequence, diseases are spread specially in urban areas which use fast foods more. So, not only have not improved these easy to prepare foods the quality of lives, but also they have decreased it.
Last but not least, the fast-made foods are invented as a way to keeping pace with fast life styles in modern world in order to help people to have enough time to do other duties and also have more time to be more intimate with family members; but I believe that all of these facilities cause to have colder families; for example, mothers are seeking ways to be more comfortable and skip their tasks. So, these kind of changes cannot be considered as a modifier.
To sum up, due to the fact that prevailing easy-made food in the world causes lots of health problem and spreads diseases; it could not improve our lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...le find some way to prepare food easier as well. Although the easier prepared food...
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Suggestion: addition,
...ein which is necessary for our body. In addition these kind of food cause obesity especi...
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... is necessary for our body. In addition these kind of food cause obesity especially in you...
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Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a way' or 'another way'.
Suggestion: a way; another way
... is that fast foods or frozen foods, as an another way to make food faster, have very low qual...
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...e comfortable and skip their tasks. So, these kind of changes cannot be considered as a mo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eases; it could not improve our lives.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'in addition', 'kind of', 'such as', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.250704225352 0.229887763892 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.154929577465 0.158761421928 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.101408450704 0.0866891130778 117% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0704225352113 0.046263068375 152% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0450704225352 0.0685040099705 66% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118309859155 0.118717715034 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0366197183099 0.0351676179071 104% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.21568459218 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0422535211268 0.0309702414327 136% => OK
Particles: 0.00281690140845 0.00188951952338 149% => OK
Determiners: 0.0704225352113 0.0887237588012 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00845070422535 0.0209618222197 40% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0140845070423 0.0139019557991 101% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1817.0 2387.08602151 76% => OK
No of words: 323.0 408.028673835 79% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6253869969 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.272445820433 0.338922669872 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.195046439628 0.251872472559 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.105263157895 0.174417080927 60% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0650154798762 0.112833075102 58% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21568459218 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532507739938 0.524397521467 102% => OK
Word variations: 55.8118578534 59.2087087015 94% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6684587814 58% => OK
Sentence length: 26.9166666667 20.5533526081 131% => OK
Sentence length SD: 101.283704952 48.84282405 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.416666667 120.699889404 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9166666667 20.5533526081 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.916666666667 0.644075263715 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 46.4213106295 45.7405998639 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.5 1.45489161554 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250586745027 0.300154397459 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.101482918926 0.103427244359 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0805810581999 0.0752933317313 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.596938461727 0.497263757937 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.237479426581 0.151897553556 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107401042694 0.114077575197 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648123402662 0.0781384742642 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.301299535831 0.336927656856 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0431770612501 0.067059652881 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166818536185 0.210909579961 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592607144241 0.0618886996521 96% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8870967742 42% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.6433691756 81% => OK
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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