One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job.
Living in today’s complex society necessitates everyone to enhance the level of knowledge and experience in the early stages of life. In this regards, there has been a heated controversy among parents on whether it is a appropriate approach to encourage children to take a part time job or not. I personally believe that if it does not intervene with educational matters could be a wise approach for a couple of reasons.
We all know that the most important matter adults are dealing with is monetary affairs. The most successful persons are those who know well how to manage money and how to save money for the future. If the same experience occurs during childhood, it can be the most significant guide for living in adult ages. The children can take a part time paid job and provide, for example, their daily expenses through the salary of the same job. In this way, the children are thought that they are not able to buy everything they want; if so, their money will be finished. In addition, they will learn that if they want to buy a costly object, they have to save their money for several weeks or months.
Besides being good monetary managers, children are able to learn the concepts of responsibility from the early ages of their lives. Adults have different and heavy responsibilities in family and workplace. If they fail to accomplish their duties, undoubtedly they face severe problem in their lives. Therefore, it is very important for children to learn that if they undertake a responsibility, they should try their best to do it from childhood. Employers usually determine rewards or punishments with respect to the quality of doing job. If children are though these concepts practically by a part time job, there are unlikely face a severe problem in their adult lives. Reading biography of the successful businessmen vividly reveals that most of them took a job in their childhood. Taking a job not only helped them to be financially independent but also they made them to be diligent and patient to reach their goals.
In the light of aforementioned details regarding the importance of taking a part time job, I would believe that parent should cautiously suggest children appropriate part time jobs to teach them the responsibility and the money management in their early stages of their lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1938.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91878172589 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78804074067 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48730964467 0.524837075471 93% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.919970785 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.666666667 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38888888889 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378719845632 0.236089414692 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114653688733 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924743347275 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236522677307 0.150856017488 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431194061393 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.