Parents is the best teacher
Today marriages are very important tradition all around the world. Generally two young people come together for one essential duty. Such as; first of all have a seed family and than being a parent, finally to grow up their children in the future. Do you think parents are the good teachers to educate the posterity?
First I consider that mother and father are very important person in the children's live from birth to tomb. Because when the children in an early age when they can't solve their problems suddenly their eyes looking for their parents to find a solutions to the problems. For instance when I was a little girl if I didn't do my mathematics homework quickly I run to my mother to ask her help me. That time my parents were like my hands or arms. According to this example parents are the first teachers for their children.
Second parents always protect their children from the troubles and support them emotionally. When they face a difficult situations even over their forties they also teach them how to overcome the problems by their experiences. For example once I remember that when my uncle had his first traffic accident, his family told him to be patient and to respect the other people rights whatever he was in a difficult position .
To sum up, I can say educated children are grown up by their families enormous works. Because parents are best teachers for their roses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, look, second, so, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1161.0 1977.66487455 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 244.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75819672131 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41353948479 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602459016393 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 618.680645161 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.187228058 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9285714286 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4285714286 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211174588428 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991925729517 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147408896852 0.0737576698707 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14941774614 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813000930892 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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