People go to college for various reasons in this day. In my opinion, the most important reason is getting better jobs in the future. And there are three reasons can lead you to earn a better job by attending college.
First of all, a bachelor degree is required to be hired at the basic level of jobs these days. If individuals do not have an undergraduate degree, they can only be employed in quite low paying or low-skilled fields. Also, lots of data shows that people who have an undergraduate degree can find their ideal job positions easier than the ones who do not. For example, one of my cousins who only has a high school degree can barely get promoted to higher position he wanted because of lacking a university degree.
Second, having a good personality is vital to one's career and also the key to get an ideal job. Attending university helps people developing their own unique personalities in many ways, such as learning new experiences and expanding interests, meeting new people in different fields, and viewing things with independent thinking. We not only learn professional skills but reach lots of new things in college. University has different fields of professions so that we can meet many people from different areas to broad our horizons and learn alternative ways of viewing things.
Third, good social networks bring you opportunity for finding a satisfying job. College brings people together, giving attendees the opportunity to work and live with a diverse group. By sharing experiences, students develop lifelong skills in tolerance, communication and collaboration that serve as valuable assets in many jobs. People you met in school from various groups bring you inspirations that can help you plan a good career path.
In a nutshell, having a bachelor degree is a prerequisite for employment in the modern era and students not only learn new experiences but also build up strong social contacts in school and these will help them get better jobs more easily than the ones who do not attend college.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 47, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
..., having a good personality is vital to ones career and also the key to get an ideal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, third, as to, for example, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98245614035 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73504214314 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558479532164 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5347119238 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267854863622 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891139826522 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709415848684 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148653214599 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638234782148 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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