People have different methods to reduce their stress. However, I think most effective ways are listen to music and going to nature. Listen to your favorite song makes you feel calm. It helps your mind to look at other things and reduces your focus on your difficulties. Going to nature and watching its beauty also is a key to reduce stress and have a healthy mind.
First of all, I believe that listen to favorite music is one of the most effective ways to relieve stress. Listen to my favorite song is a tranquilizer for me. It can diminish feelings of tension, anxiety, and stress. Therefore, when you are worry about personal life or you are in a stressful situation I suggest you listen to a light music. It really makes you feel calm. For example, when I have a difficult exam, the first thing I do is listen to my favorite music. It not only reduces my stress but also causes me to learn more efficiently.
In addition, I think one of the most important reasons of stress is living in massive cities. There are a lot of factors such as pollution, noise, heavy traffic and overpopulation in a city that cause you to stay under constant pressure and consequently your stress will increase. Thus, in order to decrease your tension and stress you should try to spend more time in the nature and far away from crowded cities. This issue makes you feel more relaxed. Green color of the nature and pleasant weather raise your spirit, too. For instance, when I come across a problem I usually go hiking in the nature. It soothes me and has a good effect on my mind.
In conclusion, music and nature are two effective ways to overcome your stress. Listen to music is an ideal way to get rid of tension and stress and helps you to have a peaceful mind. Furthermore, if you are in the hustle and bustle of life and suffering from stress, I recommend you allocate a specific time a week to go to the nature regularly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'listened'.
Suggestion: listened
...owever, I think most effective ways are listen to music and going to nature. Listen to...
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Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: I_AM_WORRY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worried'?
Suggestion: worried
...ty, and stress. Therefore, when you are worry about personal life or you are in a str...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, look, really, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49714285714 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47320332643 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488571428571 0.524837075471 93% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The sentence length is short
Sentence length SD: 38.2249756093 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.5454545455 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32178602615 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100202960446 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733109614144 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216729282416 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335649899392 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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