People today spend too much money on clothing to improve their appearance. Agree or disagree?
Some people state that spending money on clothing is totally a waste of time and money because they believe that there are other ways to spend money much better than on clothing. However, others think otherwise. The latter agrees that it is crucial to spend money on clothing because they enjoy their appearance. In my opinion, there are other ways of spending money rather than on clothing. I feel this way as I will talk over in this article.
First of all, one of the important ways to spend money is on travels. Each following year we can see many people scrimping in order to go for travels on vacation. For example, they spend time saving precious amount of money so that, when on vacation, they are able to make some small trips around their states passing by different vilages, or even going abroad visiting different countries with their different cultures. Therefore, this example elucidates the desideratum of spending on travels and showing that it is a waste of time and money spending it on outfits.
Moreover, another important way of spending money wisely would be on entertainement. Because we spend too much time working hard every following year, it is primal to catch our savings and spend them going to the theater, to a concert amusements parks, etc. For instance, we nowadays are living in a very stressful world where we have too much hard work to do and this every now and again turns into depression our lives. What it is more, many persons are extremely busy at work to receive merely the amount for survival not even having money for food. Thus, this instance explains the necessity of devoiding an amount of money for entertainment because we should be aware of it and try to assuage the stress caused by work.
Finally, I strongly agree that spending money on travels and entertainement are the best option for anybody who craves for a good life because both travel and entertainement help us to fend off the stressful life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75882352941 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51537830707 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541176470588 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4674620339 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.866666667 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270775517159 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999201336649 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831427604973 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164657262122 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739865244912 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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