We can mention a lot of answers to this question like gaining honor, helping others, being independent, being busy, making money, being more active in society. Most people focus more on making money as the main reason to find an occupation. Following, I try to elaborate three of the aim of working that I mentioned above.
First, if we look at military men's responsibilities, we can not claim they work because of money. Soldiers sacrifice his life to safeguard of freedom, independence, and dignity of their nation. No one can measure their efforts with monetary issues. Also, an athlete spends plenty of his energy and time in regular exercises to beat all his components because of the honor of the champion.
Second, there are still those who intend to assist others. I think that a small example may give some light on this point. Doctors Without Borders have a mission to provide impartial medical relief to victims of wars, disease, natural or man-made disasters without regard to religious, race, or political affiliation. I think that nobody wants to put his life in danger because of money.
Third, most students in developed countries work as long as they are studying at the university. They know that a partial career not only let them make money but also have more edges. To clarify, I had worked in a small chemical factory when I studied engineering at university. From the economic angle, I satisfied abundant of my needs like rent, university tuition, cost of communities, etc. Beyond financial matters, it helped me to make valuable experience in my field of study. Also, I became familiar with many experts and ordinary people that each of them impacted my job future positively.
Taking into account all factors and angles involved in the significant purpose of working, we may conclude that we can not limit it on making money. There is a wide range of goals that every person can have according to his condition. Last but not least, I hope that the next generation becomes more aware to choose their job based on their inclination and interest.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, second, so, still, third, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92045454545 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65257402423 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3664742376 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18368146979 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488891089132 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450675861083 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893044303277 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044083513515 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.