A person who keeps his room clean and organised will be successful in life also, do you agree or disagree support with relevant examples.
Every person on this planet want to be successful at some point in their life. But, how successful a person is, cannot be determined by the way in which they keep their room clean or how well they organise it. Hence, I disagree with the given topic, as there are various other factors that play a significant role in determining a person’s success.
The first important factor is the person’s attitude towards life and how he thinks in different circumstances. A positive attitude towards any situation in life is very important. People who always think in a negative way, whom we call pessimist can never succeed in life. A real life example of this is my father. Once his company had undergone a great loss, but he didn’t let this affect him or the company and kept working hard with a positive attitude and made sure that every other employee in the company had the same feeling. This led the company to overcome their losses and once again gain a superior position in the market.
Another important factor that can lead a person to success is discipline. A person who is disciplined and follows all the moral ethics is likely to be more successful and this will be a long term success. On the contrary, a person who is indiscipline, takes everything for granted and always tries to take shortcuts in life to achieve goals will be successful but this success will be ephemeral and won’t last long. A great example of this is the leader of India, Mahatma Gandhi. His disciplined behavior helped India in getting freedom from the British.
In conclusion, having an organised life is important for an individual to be successful, but one cannot completely determine one’s success on this sole factor as there are various crucial factors involved as discussed above. While a combination of all these factors will definitely ensure the success of a person.
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...al factors involved as discussed above. While a combination of all these factors will...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'in conclusion', 'by the way', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.213513513514 0.229887763892 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.156756756757 0.158761421928 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.110810810811 0.0866891130778 128% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0351351351351 0.046263068375 76% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0378378378378 0.0685040099705 55% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0945945945946 0.118717715034 80% => OK
Participles: 0.027027027027 0.0351676179071 77% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.75902385173 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0189189189189 0.0309702414327 61% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.124324324324 0.0887237588012 140% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0216216216216 0.0209618222197 103% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0243243243243 0.0139019557991 175% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1888.0 2387.08602151 79% => OK
No of words: 321.0 408.028673835 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.88161993769 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.355140186916 0.338922669872 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.271028037383 0.251872472559 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.17445482866 0.174417080927 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.118380062305 0.112833075102 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75902385173 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548286604361 0.524397521467 105% => OK
Word variations: 58.2655570347 59.2087087015 98% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0625 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1335811389 48.84282405 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 120.699889404 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.644075263715 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 47.1653037383 45.7405998639 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.45882352941 1.45489161554 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254697817525 0.300154397459 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.121008355259 0.103427244359 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.116690630083 0.0752933317313 155% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.50527647405 0.497263757937 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.166717836281 0.151897553556 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964209662381 0.114077575197 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571685854368 0.0781384742642 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.308858779698 0.336927656856 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0287734430826 0.067059652881 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172063242337 0.210909579961 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476668639721 0.0618886996521 77% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.