Question: A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position
Considering the many pros and cons of a new factory in any community will elicit different feelings. Factories are widely thought to be ugly and unsanitary blights on a community. On the other hand, factories have been the lifeblood of many towns and cities. Overall if a factory were proposed for my community, I would feel obligated to support the construction because the positive effects outweigh the negative influences.
Initially looking at the negative aspects of a new factory in a community, the prospect seems bleak. Factories are notorious for pollutants, both to the surrounding air and water. Sometimes the pollutant is harmful to the atmosphere and sometimes it is an offensive smell, either way, it is unwanted in any community. Pollutants and the ugly architecture of factories create an industrial look that makes an area undesirable and drives down property values, which are often linked to schools and other community features. These reasons seem like enough justification for rejecting a factory proposal.
On the other hand, it’s important to recognize that many stereotypical images of factories are dated pictures of the coal burning factories of the Industrial Revolution. These are not the factories of modern times or the future. Many factories are now controlled by government regulations that limit the levels and types of pollutants a factory produces. Another benefit is that many companies want the best in shipping capabilities, which means that they will often construct new and improved roads throughout communities. Lastly and perhaps most importantly, a new factory produces jobs, which encourage more people to a community, thus generating more infrastructure and development.
Therefore, I would feel compelled to approve of a new factory in my community. Understanding our modern expectations for cleanliness, environmental awareness, and positive production, a modern factory would not be a pollution producer, but an opportunity producer. A factory would create a better community through higher employment rates, improved roads, and an improved economy. Those advantages would trickle into other parts of the community including schools, government projects, and small businesses. The more money a community generates, the more options and opportunities are associated as well. All of those are improvements I would need to encourage.
All in all, a comparison of the disadvantages and benefits to a new factory shows that the positive outcomes compensate for any possible negative influences. With regulations placed on modern factories, the economic benefits to the public are great. As a community member, I would be concerned with the job opportunities and improved lifestyles of all people in my area. The obvious choice would be to build a factory, knowing of the paybacks to all people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, lastly, look, so, therefore, thus, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2415.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 440.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48863636364 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16263617288 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511363636364 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 785.7 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7906281027 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.625 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.79166666667 5.45110844103 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208365968916 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664812606575 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477768154007 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127995746953 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450271278485 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 58.1214874552 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 10.9000537634 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 86.8835125448 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.