Question:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today's world, science and technology ease the difficulty of traveling. Nowadays, with the advent of trains, planes and advanced cars, people can travel thousands of miles in less than one day. As far as the destination of traveling is concerned, some people believe that one must travel in her or his own country while others believe otherwise. I, personally, believe that the advantages of traveling in our own country outweigh its disadvantages. I have a penchant for this view for some reasons, among which the issue of money, culture, and above all helping the economy of our own country are most conspicuous ones.
It is crystal clear that traveling in our own country is much cheaper than traveling to foreign country. people, usually, tend to be kind to people of their own country, by contrast they usually become strict toward foreign people and they want to deceive or cheat them. the financial issue is not exception. In addition, in born country people know where to go for eating, watching, or playing so much so that they do not need guidance and their expenditure incredibly become less.
Every person must know his culture, reading books and searching in internet is not enough to understand completely the culture of our born country. knowing the roots of our culture such as settlement that remain through history and the way of living of our predecessor give confidence to people. societies that value their culture, usually, become powerful among other societies, therefore I think that between the two alternative of traveling in our own country or foreign country the first choice is much wiser.
tourism is one of the best way to gain money for every country that has the capacity. people who gather among the world to visit one particular country, usually, come with a lot of money. This money can contribute to build school, universities, hospitals to name but a few. why in the first place one must deprive their own people from this money and helping other countries instead. As far as ethic issue is concerned, people have commitment toward their own people and they must try to improve their own country, thus traveling in our own country is a better choice.
In conclusion, in every stage of life people must always choose between easy way or better way. I think that it is better to travel in our own country on the grounds that on can enjoy cheaper travel and save money for other issue in his life, they can also know about their culture and understand their own people, finally they can do their part for developing their country.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'while', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'in the first place']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.219262295082 0.229887763892 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.147540983607 0.158761421928 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0901639344262 0.0866891130778 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0614754098361 0.046263068375 133% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0758196721311 0.0685040099705 111% => OK
Prepositions: 0.139344262295 0.118717715034 117% => OK
Participles: 0.0368852459016 0.0351676179071 105% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.50221389577 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0266393442623 0.0309702414327 86% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0614754098361 0.0887237588012 69% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0204918032787 0.0209618222197 98% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0122950819672 0.0139019557991 88% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2591.0 2387.08602151 109% => OK
No of words: 440.0 408.028673835 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.88863636364 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.345454545455 0.338922669872 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.256818181818 0.251872472559 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.15 0.174417080927 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.102272727273 0.112833075102 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50221389577 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465909090909 0.524397521467 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.4916072163 59.2087087015 87% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.1578947368 20.5533526081 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5080788211 48.84282405 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.368421053 120.699889404 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1578947368 20.5533526081 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.736842105263 0.644075263715 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.54480286738 198% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 48.8397129187 45.7405998639 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.38848920863 1.45489161554 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335012215324 0.300154397459 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.125660823138 0.103427244359 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0581685386419 0.0752933317313 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.552644224321 0.497263757937 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.135722470209 0.151897553556 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13945976743 0.114077575197 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552379366226 0.0781384742642 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.365974884474 0.336927656856 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0504493327783 0.067059652881 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233563846298 0.210909579961 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577214525728 0.0618886996521 93% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.