Should governments spend more money on improving roads and highways, or should governments spend more money on improving public transportation (buses, trains, subways)? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
The quality of roads and highways is gradually degrading these days and there are chances that it may continue to become worse. The main reason for this is, lack of responsibility from the government’s side along with low funding. Hence, in my opinion government should invest more in improving roads and highways. I feel this way for two important reasons which will be explained further in the essay.
To begin with, the most tremendous impact of poor roads can be seen by the increase in the number of accidents. Threat to people’s life has increased drastically because of this. A recent example to this is the devastating accident that I witnessed a week back on the Mumbai expressway. Because of the heavy rains there were huge pot holes and a car got trapped in that and because of that it went upside down and banged the divider on the highway. Everyone inside the car was dead on spot. Hence, government should take steps towards this major problem.
Furthermore, if the roads and highways are not well maintained, there is no point investing on public transport. After all, they are also vehicles that need proper path to be driven on. Because of the poor condition of roads the amount of traffic jams has also increased by a great extent. This in turn leads to increase in noise pollution as people will keep honking until there way is cleared. Thus, the official bodies should make efforts to reduce this problem.
To put it briefly, government should not stop funding for public transport as this will also help in resolving the above problems to some extent. But, the ultimate solution to them is that government should start investing more funds in developing and maintaining proper roads and highways. This is mainly due to the two reasons explained above.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... that need proper path to be driven on. Because of the poor condition of roads the amou...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'briefly', 'but', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'after all', 'i feel', 'in my opinion', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.237536656891 0.229887763892 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.152492668622 0.158761421928 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0762463343109 0.0866891130778 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0469208211144 0.046263068375 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0234604105572 0.0685040099705 34% => OK
Prepositions: 0.146627565982 0.118717715034 124% => OK
Participles: 0.0439882697947 0.0351676179071 125% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.62635025612 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0322580645161 0.0309702414327 104% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.111436950147 0.0887237588012 126% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0293255131965 0.0209618222197 140% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00293255131965 0.0139019557991 21% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1792.0 2387.08602151 75% => OK
No of words: 305.0 408.028673835 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87540983607 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.48200974243 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.337704918033 0.338922669872 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.23606557377 0.251872472559 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.170491803279 0.174417080927 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.111475409836 0.112833075102 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62635025612 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577049180328 0.524397521467 110% => OK
Word variations: 62.329533558 59.2087087015 105% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.9444444444 20.5533526081 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9737546693 48.84282405 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5555555556 120.699889404 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9444444444 20.5533526081 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.777777777778 0.644075263715 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 40.5510018215 45.7405998639 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.92105263158 1.45489161554 132% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168438540757 0.300154397459 56% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0689894835334 0.103427244359 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0417692497388 0.0752933317313 55% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.464330045493 0.497263757937 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.126512721386 0.151897553556 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724150568178 0.114077575197 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603719752884 0.0781384742642 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.41204989641 0.336927656856 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0390081173381 0.067059652881 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133440943507 0.210909579961 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295426048293 0.0618886996521 48% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8870967742 50% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.86379928315 259% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 8.42114695341 36% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.6433691756 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.