Should governments spend more money on improving roads and highways, or should governments spend more money on improving public transportation (buses, trains, subways)? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
Many people believe that governments should spend more money on improving roads and highways. However , other people think that more money should be spent on improving public transportation. Personally, I think that both of these opinions have their advantages and disadvantages.
The first reason for improving public transportation is overpopulation. The amount of cars is rising dramatically. As a result of this fact the contemplation of air is increasing that leads to irreversible aftereffects such as the presence of acid rains and different kinds of human diseases. So, the improving of public transportation will reduce pollution.
The second reason for this is the possibility to decrease the amount of traffic jams that also have a huge influence on air pollution. Moreover, it will save time and people's money. One does not have to pay for gas for his car, car insurance, repair, oil change and etc.
The third reason for this is a sharp decrease in the level of car accidents. People will feel more secure in this case. Road accidents have become a violent issue and people feel that the Government should do some thing to reduce the accidents happening on the roads daily.
However, despite all these advantages this decision has a few disadvantages. First of all, public transportation means the presence of schedule and working hours. So, one has to wait for a bus or for a train in a subway or call for a taxi in order to get somewhere. Second of all, it is a big chance that one has to spend some time getting to the nearest bus stop or subway entrance.
As for roads and highways, I think it is a very important and topical issue. A personal car in this modern world is an essential vehicle. It gives one freedom and independence. Improving roads and highways governments will decrease the number of car accidents and traffic jams. I believe that in several years air pollution can be dramatically reduced by using sun energy to refuel our cars.
Finally, I think that governments should spend money on improving public transportation as well as on roads and highways because it will benefit all people.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'third', 'well', 'as for', 'as to', 'i think', 'such as', 'as a result', 'as well as', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.277777777778 0.229887763892 121% => OK
Verbs: 0.141414141414 0.158761421928 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0782828282828 0.0866891130778 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0454545454545 0.046263068375 98% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0328282828283 0.0685040099705 48% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123737373737 0.118717715034 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0328282828283 0.0351676179071 93% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.94282969636 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0227272727273 0.0309702414327 73% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.108585858586 0.0887237588012 122% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0252525252525 0.0209618222197 120% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00252525252525 0.0139019557991 18% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2138.0 2387.08602151 90% => OK
No of words: 361.0 408.028673835 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.92243767313 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.329639889197 0.338922669872 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.224376731302 0.251872472559 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.171745152355 0.174417080927 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.13296398892 0.112833075102 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94282969636 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484764542936 0.524397521467 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.7804676153 59.2087087015 86% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.6956521739 20.5533526081 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7760298362 48.84282405 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9565217391 120.699889404 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6956521739 20.5533526081 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.739130434783 0.644075263715 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.5376344086 154% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 38.1333253041 45.7405998639 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.97701149425 1.45489161554 136% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282504271555 0.300154397459 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.10196497406 0.103427244359 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.107983023086 0.0752933317313 143% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.537482083611 0.497263757937 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.173678387723 0.151897553556 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109776733884 0.114077575197 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129944347915 0.0781384742642 166% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.228461015519 0.336927656856 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0669555658627 0.067059652881 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191410048773 0.210909579961 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136524789621 0.0618886996521 221% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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