Should young people be given strict rules to be followed in a society? Do you agree or disagree on this. Support with relevant examples and reasons.
The young generation is the future of any nation. The way in which youth progresses is one of the major factor in determining the development of a nation. Thus the younger generation needs to be responsible, more focused and determined and for that it is important that some strict rules are imposed on them while they are in their youth stage and hence I agree with the topic.
One reason why these rules are required is that it makes them more disciplined which in turn changes their approach towards anything they do or perform. Following the rules will help them do their work on time and they won’t procrastinate or delay their work. This will help them in the progress of their work which will directly have a positive effect on the society or the institution they are working in. And hence this will have a positive impact on the growth of our nation.
Another reason why imposing rules are important is that youth is a very risky age and this is the age when most of the young generation lose their track, forget all their responsibilities and indulge themselves into activities which are not beneficial for them nor for the society. They lose their focus and all their actions have a negative impact on them and also on everyone around them. Thus it is important that they follow some ground rules and their parents as well as their teachers make sure that they are following these rules.
Thus, in conclusion imposing rules on the youth is important. It can be difficult but as it is followed everywhere that if the rules are not followed a penalty has to be paid, the same can be applied on the youth and this will ensure that they follow them. At the beginning there will a lot opposition from the youth’s side but it is the responsibility of the society to make them realize how important they are.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'while', 'as to', 'in conclusion', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.202857142857 0.229887763892 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.168571428571 0.158761421928 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0714285714286 0.0866891130778 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0371428571429 0.046263068375 80% => OK
Pronouns: 0.108571428571 0.0685040099705 158% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.12 0.118717715034 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0285714285714 0.0351676179071 81% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.54086413107 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00857142857143 0.0309702414327 28% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.122857142857 0.0887237588012 138% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0228571428571 0.0209618222197 109% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0228571428571 0.0139019557991 164% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1832.0 2387.08602151 77% => OK
No of words: 325.0 408.028673835 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63692307692 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.252307692308 0.338922669872 74% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.196923076923 0.251872472559 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.141538461538 0.174417080927 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0923076923077 0.112833075102 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54086413107 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455384615385 0.524397521467 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.3579093418 59.2087087015 77% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6684587814 63% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5533526081 122% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6780920591 48.84282405 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.923076923 120.699889404 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.5533526081 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.846153846154 0.644075263715 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 44.6923076923 45.7405998639 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.11818181818 1.45489161554 77% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185004403998 0.300154397459 62% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.20905062527 0.103427244359 202% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.08231424507 0.0752933317313 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.626594764895 0.497263757937 126% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.119023764164 0.151897553556 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927792873009 0.114077575197 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533443124971 0.0781384742642 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.395194192922 0.336927656856 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0186812254718 0.067059652881 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137263289405 0.210909579961 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222315339222 0.0618886996521 36% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 13.6433691756 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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