In some countries, people are no longer allowed to smoke in many public places and office buildings. Do you think this is a good rule or a bad rule? Use specific reasons and details to support your position.
Nowadays, more and more people smoke in the public places and office buildings in some countries. However, people are no longer allowed to smoke in many places. I, however, think that all governments should permit people to smoke in the public places and office buildings because smoking is not healthy, it is wasted time and it can make fire.
Firstly, smoking is not good for people‘s health, especially for the smoker. They can suffer from many diseases such as cancer, some disease regarding lung. Moreover, it not only effect to the smokers but also reduces the health of people who inhale the smoke or stay with the smokers when they smoke.
Secondly, not only hurt the people’s health but also takes them a lot of time to smoke. For example, my uncle is a smoking addict. A few days ago, I had a hard exercise and I asked him to help me out. At that time, he was smoking so he told me to wait for him until he finished the smoke. Therefore, I have to wait for him more than 30 minutes. So if every person smokes in the office building, they need to spend much time to smoke and it may distract their work or disturb other people who work with them or work in the same area with them.
Finally, further and even more importantly, it can lead to the flame. There are many places where is really dangerous if it meets something to cause the fire. For example, if you smoke in somewhere near the forest and throw the cigarette in the forest without extinguishing the fire, it may produce the fire in all the forest. Thus, people must be really careful if they smoke in the hazardous places.
In conclusion, I believe that the government should ban the smoke throughout the world, as the consequences, they will not in the greatest health, they waste their time lots and they can create more and more fire. I will try my best to prevent every person who I meet from smoking.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'really', 'regarding', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.189119170984 0.229887763892 82% => OK
Verbs: 0.147668393782 0.158761421928 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0673575129534 0.0866891130778 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0751295336788 0.046263068375 162% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0958549222798 0.0685040099705 140% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.103626943005 0.118717715034 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0155440414508 0.0351676179071 44% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.31234423123 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0310880829016 0.0309702414327 100% => OK
Particles: 0.00259067357513 0.00188951952338 137% => OK
Determiners: 0.0906735751295 0.0887237588012 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0284974093264 0.0209618222197 136% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0129533678756 0.0139019557991 93% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1882.0 2387.08602151 79% => OK
No of words: 344.0 408.028673835 84% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47093023256 5.86048508987 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.290697674419 0.338922669872 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.183139534884 0.251872472559 73% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.110465116279 0.174417080927 63% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0697674418605 0.112833075102 62% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31234423123 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502906976744 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 52.4960511799 59.2087087015 89% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.1111111111 20.5533526081 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0339090855 48.84282405 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.555555556 120.699889404 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 20.5533526081 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.05555555556 0.644075263715 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 37.4250645995 45.7405998639 82% => OK
Elegance: 0.967479674797 1.45489161554 66% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28923661827 0.300154397459 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.118610750432 0.103427244359 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.099081557508 0.0752933317313 132% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.524119914177 0.497263757937 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.190968627279 0.151897553556 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127641066955 0.114077575197 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107134532134 0.0781384742642 137% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.312147908112 0.336927656856 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0701421009069 0.067059652881 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205966690241 0.210909579961 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138542850931 0.0618886996521 224% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8870967742 50% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 8.42114695341 47% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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