Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Which point of view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.
Nowadays, almost everyone go to university for a degree. Having a degree has an important role in managing to find a job. Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes; others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Even though a lot of people believe that going to classes should be optional for students because students have more time to work and gain experiences; I completely believe that students should be required to attend classes for two important reasons that are discussed in the following paragraphs.
The main reason is that students can learn some skills. Some skills such as presentation skill, doing research, and how to do research are not learnt without going to classes. For example, in my university, one of my courses, compiler lab course, was optional for students to attend class. Because in that semester I had worked in a company, that produces software for factories, I did not attend in that course. The teacher determined a presentation for the students, and also he taught them how they can have a good presentation. Since I did not attend in that course I did not learn how I present in front of a lot of audience. As you can see, if I attended the class, I would able to present a good speech.
Another reason is that students can ask teacher right away. It is very obvious that if students attend classes, if they have a problem they can ask the teacher right away. For example, when I was a student, studying Artificial Intelligence which defines as systems that can act like a human and are able to learn, I had a course which is called Image Processing Lab course, I always attend the class and as soon as I had a problem, I asked the teacher right away. At the end of term I was very convenient with this course but my friend, Mahdi, who did not go to the classes, had a lot of problem during the week exam, and he had to ask me to help him with his question. Finally, I get a good score but my friend failed the exam. In that semester I graduated but my friend had to enroll for the next semester because of the lab course. This experience taught him that always attends all classes.
In sum, I definitely agree with the idea that students should be required attend classes. Not only can they learn some skills but they also can ask the teacher right away. Universities should force students to attend all of their classes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1993.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5816091954 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54939937592 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.422988505747 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 608.4 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.5803565616 48.9658058833 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9047619048 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 5.45110844103 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390269222717 0.236089414692 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126951209764 0.076458572812 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.161419116367 0.0737576698707 219% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270588709718 0.150856017488 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.16612881606 0.0645574589148 257% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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