some people prefer to eat at food stands and resturants. Other people prefer to prepare andeat food at home. Which do you prefer? use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Food stands and restaurants are attractive, serving delicious food but have we questioned ourselves? What happens to our body when we consume these foods? Fast foods from stalls and restaurants are mostly unhealthy leading to the most prevailing disease of Obesity leading to high pressure, diabetes, hypertension etc. Therefore I would prefer to cook food at home according to my needs.
First of all, food from restaurants and stalls are unhealthy and not balanced. Researchers and doctors strictly prescribe obese people to avoid junk foods. So why should we wait for the doctor to prescribe that? A balanced diet is required for leading a healthy life and a balanced diet can be only availed by preparing and eating at home rather than opting restaurants.
Preparing food at home will also allow a person to decide, according to him, what is required to meet his need and also maintain a balanced diet. Eating at home can also keep one away from various diseases such as high pressure, diabetes, obesity etc. and also food poisoning as a cause of unhygienic cooking methods in restaurants.
Lastly, an important thing is that the foods at restaurants are relatively costlier than compare to food prepared at home. So if a person is on a tight budget, like me, should definitely consider preparing food at home. You will surely need to allot some time to prepare food but believe me it will be worth it. Anyway, every person now or then gets bored after continuously eating at restaurants and stalls. I have experienced this myself and a lot of my friend feel the same way.
In a nutshell, there are many positive sides of cooking at home. Preparing food at home not only help one maintain a balanced diet leading to better health, better physic and lesser vulnerability to some serious diseases but also help save some amount money which can be invested on some other productive purposes.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'anyway', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'lastly', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'such as', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.225988700565 0.229887763892 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.183615819209 0.158761421928 116% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0790960451977 0.0866891130778 91% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0677966101695 0.046263068375 147% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0480225988701 0.0685040099705 70% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0988700564972 0.118717715034 83% => OK
Participles: 0.0706214689266 0.0351676179071 201% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.66286736828 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0423728813559 0.0309702414327 137% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0706214689266 0.0887237588012 80% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0254237288136 0.0209618222197 121% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0141242937853 0.0139019557991 102% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1905.0 2387.08602151 80% => OK
No of words: 322.0 408.028673835 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91614906832 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.347826086957 0.338922669872 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.260869565217 0.251872472559 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.17701863354 0.174417080927 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.127329192547 0.112833075102 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66286736828 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555900621118 0.524397521467 106% => OK
Word variations: 59.6311998728 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.8888888889 20.5533526081 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8904678781 48.84282405 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.833333333 120.699889404 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 20.5533526081 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.611111111111 0.644075263715 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 43.9758454106 45.7405998639 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.32075471698 1.45489161554 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39556972325 0.300154397459 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0799839214042 0.103427244359 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0605926923836 0.0752933317313 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.487162101155 0.497263757937 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.138876121711 0.151897553556 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133695462522 0.114077575197 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793435889941 0.0781384742642 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.268369520636 0.336927656856 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0296060419425 0.067059652881 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242558270522 0.210909579961 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353996842514 0.0618886996521 57% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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