Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this ever-changing world, eating food is one of the significant enjoyment in life and sometimes it changes to biggest pleasure for families. In addition, the way of eating has great impact on peoples’ health. Although eating prepared food in restaurant would be easier than making food at home, I prefer to eat at home. There are three reasons why I have this preference.
First and foremost, if you want to cook food at home, you will use healthy ingredients such as fresh vegetables, and all kinds of proteins and vitamins in food; while, in restaurants the color and appearance of food are more important than its ingredients. As an instance I often try to use steam- cooked vegetables in food; whereas always fried vegetables are used in restaurant with lots of oil which plays an important role in spreading diseases such as cancer and obesity among young people.
Another prominent reason is that, cooking is one of my best entertainment in life. When I cook, I forget all of thoughts especially disturbing ones. During cooking I try to use my creativity to make delicious food and its result always will be satisfactory for me. It would be so enjoyable for me when I serve the food and my family like it. My husband often prefer to eat at home because he gets use to the tastes of my foods and does not like to eat in restaurant any more.
Last but not least, cooking at home is cheaper than eating in restaurant because when you cook at home, you will use everything you have at home but in restaurant you will be overcharged and have to pay twice or three times more than its real price. This is the matter of great importance when you have a big family for example two or three children in a family. In this case the price of only one meal in a restaurant would be a big deal which is not affordable for me. So I prefer to cook at home with the best ingredients and the healthiest method of cooking.
To sum up, cooking at home has lots of advantages such as, using healthy and fresh ingredients, using less oil than restaurants, and having cheaper meal that are good reasons to assure everybody to cook by oneself.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the biggest'.
Suggestion: to the biggest
...oyment in life and sometimes it changes to biggest pleasure for families. In addition, the...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'whereas', 'while', 'for example', 'in addition', 'such as', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.221957040573 0.229887763892 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.162291169451 0.158761421928 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0859188544153 0.0866891130778 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.035799522673 0.046263068375 77% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0715990453461 0.0685040099705 105% => OK
Prepositions: 0.155131264916 0.118717715034 131% => OK
Participles: 0.0405727923628 0.0351676179071 115% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.62533419991 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0334128878282 0.0309702414327 108% => OK
Particles: 0.00238663484487 0.00188951952338 126% => OK
Determiners: 0.054892601432 0.0887237588012 62% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0167064439141 0.0209618222197 80% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0190930787589 0.0139019557991 137% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2135.0 2387.08602151 89% => OK
No of words: 386.0 408.028673835 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5310880829 5.86048508987 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.274611398964 0.338922669872 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.19689119171 0.251872472559 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.139896373057 0.174417080927 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.111398963731 0.112833075102 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62533419991 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484455958549 0.524397521467 92% => OK
Word variations: 51.8661452867 59.2087087015 88% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 24.125 20.5533526081 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.9802909444 48.84282405 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.4375 120.699889404 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 20.5533526081 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.644075263715 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 43.814119171 45.7405998639 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.54867256637 1.45489161554 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326289650363 0.300154397459 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.124471077824 0.103427244359 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0925046665999 0.0752933317313 123% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.549043856759 0.497263757937 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.199963237255 0.151897553556 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125391544554 0.114077575197 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114112220499 0.0781384742642 146% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.274164430933 0.336927656856 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0626581441563 0.067059652881 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214315819778 0.210909579961 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214529160704 0.0618886996521 35% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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