Some people prefer to get up early and work in the morning. Others prefer to get up late and work until late at night. What do you prefer. Give reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Different work demand different time shedule to perform their task. Generally speaking, I feel that waking up and doing work in the morning hours is effective and beneficial. Why I believe that I will explore in the following paragraphs.
First, early in the morning is the best time to work as our mind is fresh enough to develop the effective work. During the start of the day, our brain get rejuvenate after the sleep and we can focus even more in the task creating productive work in the short time. In contrast, working till the late night is less productive as our mind already carry a lot of unnecessary memory which impede the brain performance. In my experience I felt the difference between efficiency of working early of the day and late in the night. During my summer internship in 2019, I had to do a field work all along the day and worked till late night to make a valid report. However, I barely make draft of the work since I was already out of my energy and felt dizziness. So the left work, I finished in the morning in quite fastly and calmly.
Furthermore, habit of waking early is beneficial for maintaining good mental health. By sleeping well early in the night is essential for mollify our anxiety and pressure while we bear through out the day. According to the research article, a human who sleeps 9 o clock at night and wake up at 5 AM effectively lose their mental weariness in their sleep as their mind rest more peacefully in that period. Personally , I feel very refreshed when I sleep early and get up early. Sometimes, when I feel ill and distressed, I take a nap just after my supper and suprisingly, I feel more lively in the morning.
In conclusion, I believe that people who work early and sleeps in time get their work done effectively and make their life more healthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5626911315 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58158807057 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516819571865 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8240055689 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.25 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250591975141 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891650267594 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574432677087 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152638647748 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454743503206 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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