Some people prefer to live in the country. Others prefer to live in the town or big cities. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Since the dawn of humanity, human beings have been engaged in a great struggle to find comfortable and suitable places for living. In today’s world, however, there is a heated controversy as to whether one should live in the city or in the country. As far as I am concerned, the advantages of the city life substantially outweigh those of the country life. I have a penchant for living in the city for some reasons, among which the issue of facility, education, and job opportunities are the most significant ones.
The first aspect to take into account is that there are a large number of facilities in the big cities which bring a higher level of convenient for the citizens. As population in the large cities is much greater than the country, so many grocery stores, malls, cinemas, recreational facilities, restaurants, and other reliable sources have been built in the city by people, which individuals can easily access them and save their time, bringing more convenient for them. Perhaps we should also point out that there are not usually such facilities in the rural areas and people have to travel great distances to arrive at their nearest cities to have the possibility of using them.
A further more subtle point we must consider here is that there are numerous opportunities for people in the cities to pursue their education, leading them to have a prosperous life. In today’s city life, people from the childhood to the adulthood are able to go to schools with a wider variety of degrees and programs to study, resulting in more options of fields to pursue and benefit from experienced teachers and experts. As a consequence, people could choose their career based on their interest and previous knowledge in the future. In contrast, the rural hard life obliges people, from the early ages, to pursue their parents’ professions, and they could not usually continue their education.
The last but not the least, large cities provide ample opportunities for employment and ventures particularly in the state-of-the-art areas which help people to find a proper job or start a new business. Furthermore, as the cities are more populated and there are many customers, businesses could make more money and have the chances to be thriving. Besides, by living in the city people could change their career as many as they need, for example, when their work is boring and repetitive for them, or they want to try something new. On the contrary, there are a few professions in the country, and people do not have many career choices, and they could not experience different jobs.
To summarize, by taking into account all the aforementioned reasons, one might come to the conclusion that the city life has much more significant benefits than the country life such as easy access to facilities, more chances to pursue the education, and job opportunities are the most significant ones. In today’s modern world, the more cities will be developed, the more migration will be happened to the cities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
... however, there is a heated controversy as to whether one should live in the city or in the c...
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Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... to take into account is that there are a large number of facilities in the big cities which brin...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'as to', 'for example', 'in contrast', 'such as', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.240901213172 0.229887763892 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.126516464471 0.158761421928 80% => OK
Adjectives: 0.105719237435 0.0866891130778 122% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0485268630849 0.046263068375 105% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0381282495667 0.0685040099705 56% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112651646447 0.118717715034 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0225303292894 0.0351676179071 64% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.81311389831 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0381282495667 0.0309702414327 123% => OK
Particles: 0.00173310225303 0.00188951952338 92% => OK
Determiners: 0.0918544194107 0.0887237588012 104% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0207972270364 0.0209618222197 99% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00866551126516 0.0139019557991 62% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3031.0 2387.08602151 127% => OK
No of words: 506.0 408.028673835 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.99011857708 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7428307748 4.48200974243 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.335968379447 0.338922669872 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.239130434783 0.251872472559 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.179841897233 0.174417080927 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.126482213439 0.112833075102 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81311389831 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46837944664 0.524397521467 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 54.1689429537 59.2087087015 91% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 29.7647058824 20.5533526081 145% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5177272885 48.84282405 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.294117647 120.699889404 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7647058824 20.5533526081 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.764705882353 0.644075263715 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 53.6777493606 45.7405998639 117% => OK
Elegance: 1.76422764228 1.45489161554 121% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392368723866 0.300154397459 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.149626345463 0.103427244359 145% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.061356853678 0.0752933317313 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.64363608297 0.497263757937 129% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0876023416981 0.151897553556 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192620242637 0.114077575197 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570135476247 0.0781384742642 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.47742243247 0.336927656856 142% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0310556661885 0.067059652881 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291044991438 0.210909579961 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00993465514738 0.0618886996521 16% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.