Some people prefer to live in places where the weather changes throughout the year, while other prefer to live in areas with stable temperatures. Which do you prefer, and why?
When I was a child, I often asked my mother when Christmas would arrive with snow. As someone who grew up in the tropics, such as Singapore and Indonesia, all we see is stable temperatures every day. Other people live with four seasonal changes every year. Because I grew up in the tropical areas, I prefer living in places with similar climate.
First, living in the places with stable temperatures give you routine lifestyle. For example, the night begins almost at the same time every day. Because of that, your can expect to do your daily routines to stay the same every day. You don’t need to worry about whether the sky turns pitch black in the evening, or about getting up earlier to match the daylight saving time. You can experience your daily activities without being anxious about the weather.
Second, more seasonal changes mean more expenses. Living with the steady temperatures requires you to wear normal clothes each time. Imagine if you live in places like Europe or North America, you need to wear less clothing for summer and you need to wear more clothing for winter. When I stayed in London for a student exchange program for several months, I experienced harsh winter there. I allocated my winter budget for coats without realizing that I needed special boots to wear for winter. Some nights I had to take taxis to get back home because the weather was just too cold to walk. For those extra expenditures, I ended up borrowing some cash from a friend. Hence, having to own different types of clothing due to weather changes is significantly more expensive compared to having to own just normal clothing for all year.
However, I realized that living in four-season countries has some advantages as well. For instance, seeing falling reddish-brown leaves is a nice change from summer that you have just experienced. Watching flowers and plants grow inspires our mind after having a cold dark winter.
In summary, I living in areas where the temperatures are steady is better because of the stability in temperatures and less expenditures. But it is not all the way better because living in the countries with more weather patterns can also inspire you.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in summary', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.224637681159 0.229887763892 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.166666666667 0.158761421928 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0942028985507 0.0866891130778 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.048309178744 0.046263068375 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0724637681159 0.0685040099705 106% => OK
Prepositions: 0.128019323671 0.118717715034 108% => OK
Participles: 0.036231884058 0.0351676179071 103% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.54014336285 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.036231884058 0.0309702414327 117% => OK
Particles: 0.00966183574879 0.00188951952338 511% => OK
Determiners: 0.0797101449275 0.0887237588012 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00966183574879 0.0209618222197 46% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.012077294686 0.0139019557991 87% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2187.0 2387.08602151 92% => OK
No of words: 372.0 408.028673835 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.87903225806 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.365591397849 0.338922669872 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.239247311828 0.251872472559 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.145161290323 0.174417080927 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0806451612903 0.112833075102 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54014336285 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.524397521467 105% => OK
Word variations: 61.2254005883 59.2087087015 103% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.9090909091 20.5533526081 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5639452628 48.84282405 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4090909091 120.699889404 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 20.5533526081 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.590909090909 0.644075263715 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 40.8338220919 45.7405998639 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.35294117647 1.45489161554 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.440857916021 0.300154397459 147% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0925801814351 0.103427244359 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0884067078123 0.0752933317313 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.476969877284 0.497263757937 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.152816366523 0.151897553556 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127795981088 0.114077575197 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882525097197 0.0781384742642 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.185884100051 0.336927656856 55% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0618301794853 0.067059652881 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233912981693 0.210909579961 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0898097590364 0.0618886996521 145% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.91756272401 183% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 2.75985663082 290% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.