Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big
city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and
details to support your answer.
Small Town or Big City
Choosing to live in between a small town and a big city is a bit difficult. Both of them have their own advantages and disadvantages. I would prefer to live in a small town only if it meets certain conditions.
First, a small town would be serene without any disturbances. For instance, a big city would be overcrowded with people, flooded with traffic, surrounded by buildings, etc. A small town would be less populated as compared to a big city. Also, a small town would generally be surrounded by green fields, small mountains/hills, lakes and rivers, etc. A small town is even devoid of pollution, whereas big cities are polluted by vehicles and industries. Hence, living in a small town would be a lot more peaceful compared to living in a big city.
Second, I often find people living in a small town to be more gregarious compared to people living in a big city. In general, people in big cities are busy with their schedules and don’t even have time for socialising with other people. In a big city a person wouldn’t even be recognised by the people living in his own street, whereas in a small city, people spend a lot of time with each other and care for each other. They even celebrate their festivals together. This affection from people living around is something that attracts me to live in a small town.
As I said before, there are also some disadvantages of living in a small town. A small town might not be well developed and sometimes it might not have all the facilities that a person is looking for. For instance, one could rarely find a hospital with sophisticated facilities in a small town. Also, most of the work places or educational institutions would be located in a big city. One might have to travel a long distance everyday to go to work or schools. These can be the disadvantages of living in a small town.
To conclude, a small town would be peaceful, less polluted and comprised of affectionate people. But, it might not meet all the requirements that a person needs. Hence, I would prefer to live in a small town only if it is near to my and my family members’ work place and has some minimum facilities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 427, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ne might have to travel a long distance everyday to go to work or schools. These can be ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'so', 'well', 'whereas', 'for instance', 'in general']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.217002237136 0.229887763892 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.145413870246 0.158761421928 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.109619686801 0.0866891130778 126% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0469798657718 0.046263068375 102% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0380313199105 0.0685040099705 56% => OK
Prepositions: 0.111856823266 0.118717715034 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0469798657718 0.0351676179071 134% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.81407568918 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0290827740492 0.0309702414327 94% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0984340044743 0.0887237588012 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0335570469799 0.0209618222197 160% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00447427293065 0.0139019557991 32% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2186.0 2387.08602151 92% => OK
No of words: 391.0 408.028673835 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59079283887 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.27621483376 0.338922669872 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.191815856777 0.251872472559 76% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.148337595908 0.174417080927 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.109974424552 0.112833075102 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81407568918 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.414322250639 0.524397521467 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.3483208712 59.2087087015 73% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5533526081 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.790666914 48.84282405 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0434782609 120.699889404 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.5533526081 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.521739130435 0.644075263715 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 36.1815856777 45.7405998639 79% => OK
Elegance: 1.63106796117 1.45489161554 112% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370042420909 0.300154397459 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.11457045212 0.103427244359 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.137265096661 0.0752933317313 182% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.533498611926 0.497263757937 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.168903308867 0.151897553556 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142717435859 0.114077575197 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117036390313 0.0781384742642 150% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.349978555669 0.336927656856 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.05001965047 0.067059652881 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242349608993 0.210909579961 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104425882524 0.0618886996521 169% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.91756272401 183% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 9.0 2.75985663082 326% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.