Some people prefer to spend most of their time alone. Others like to be with friends most of the time. Do you prefer to spend your time alone or with friends?
Friends are among those individuals who can influence our lives through spending time together and sharing our secrets with them. Nowadays some people may think that it would be better to be alone instead of having different friends. But honestly, I disagree and strongly believe that we should have a friend. A friend who worth it and can make our life better.
Firstly, we can have fun together. We can go out with a friend to have dinner, go to see movies or even play games with them which all of these help us to be happier more than are now. For example, I and my friend, Hossein who is my best friend since my childhood, have going to the beach every week to talk. Our conversations concern different aspects of our lives. I have a lot of fun with him and I wait all the week until weekend to go out with him. Consequently, friends know each other better since they spend time together. As you can see, a good friend can make you happier in many ways.
Secondly, a good friend can help you in tough situations. It is a well-known slang in my country that says "Good friend is better than your siblings". Since friends are familiar with each other problems they can help each other. For instance, my friend, Ali, helped me to do my university project when I was sick in my second semester. I remember he did not sleep for all night to help me in that project. Therefore, a good friend can be very helpful to overcome your obstacles.
In contrast, there are some people which they called themselves your friend but they actually exploit you. So, when people see such things in their friendship, they prefer to be alone. Some friends are very talkative and waste your time with worthless subjects to such an extent that you want to stop communicating with them. On the other hand, there are some selfish persons who do not pay attention to your demands. So, there are good reasons that some people prefer to be alone.
In conclusion, although there are some reasons which may convince some people to be alone, but I strongly believe that positive points of spending time with a friend excess its negative effects.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 161, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, first, firstly, honestly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 382.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58638743455 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44848237174 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497382198953 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0984266737 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1739130435 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6086956522 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.60869565217 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403170332096 0.236089414692 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117594500591 0.076458572812 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817456768649 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251844162242 0.150856017488 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850137455675 0.0645574589148 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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