Some people prefer to work for a large company. Others prefer to work for a small company. Which would you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.
People have a choice in their career and generally they must chose between one of the two things that working for a large company or small company. This decision is significant factor that affect people’s life. I will explain two reasons why working for a small company is preferred by me.
Firstly, you could learn a lot of things about businees life and your jobs detail and improve yourself in this area during working for a small company. For instance, when I and my friend graduated we looked for job in a big company. My friend found a job in one of the big company but I didn’t so I had to work for a small company. A few years later, when I met my friend I noticed that I had gained a lot of different abilities in my field but he was very little improved himself. That is why working for a small company is better choice than large company.
Secondly the fact that, in a small company colleagues have a close relationship and they more effectively communicate. This situation cause to increase efficiency and employees’ happiness. For example, my colleagues and I had a big project to implement in a short time. We must work together because we didn’t have enoug time to develop seperately. In a big company you must do a plan and seperate part that project. This sitiution increase developing time and communication between colleagues. That is why working for a small company is choosed.
To sum up, individually improving yourself and for company efficiency are a quite important things. In my opinion, Everybody should try to work for a small company at least at the beginning of their career. As for me they will look a lot of benefit in that kind of company.
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...least at the beginning of their career. As for me they will look a lot of benefit ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, as for, at least, for example, for instance, kind of, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81996847894 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.803057263 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27777777778 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32056738735 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113754842808 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0979402852163 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210185759614 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828702264159 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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