Some people prefer to work in one company for all their career. Other think it is better to move from company to company. Discuss the advantages of each position. Which do you think is better and why?
My father had been working in one company with full satisfaction for a long time and I'm well aware of this way of working. Although this way of working has own advantages but I really don't like to work in one company for all my career like my father. I like any kind of change in my life and actually I'm a risk taker who want to try new things. Hence, I think moving from one company to another has more advantages and in this way I will be more successful.
First of all, I would like to state that staying with one company for a long time is a good way for those people who are cautious about changes. It is very satisfying for them to work in one company for years because they'll usually promote to higher position after few years and also their salaries will increase annually. Moreover, they usually have a sense of commitment to work which cause to improve both them and their companies. However, in my opinion, there is no innovation in this type of working. It is very boring and I really cannot stand to work in one company for years.
Furthermore, moving from one company to another company has unique features that always tempts me to experience new else companies. As I mentioned, I like any kind of change in my life and working in different companies gives me an opportunity to learn new skills and be familiar with new people. In addition, it is more enjoyable and causes me to be more creative. This is because I don't have to stand tedious tasks and the same workplace for a long time. Whenever I feel that there aren't any new skills to learn I apply for a new job right away.
All in all, although there are many people like my father who are loyal to their companies but I really disagree with them. I think it is a restriction for a person and slows down his progress. Staying with one company for a long time eventually destroys your sense of innovation. I would like to state that by changing the companies I have always been successful till now and after changing I usually have found a better job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, really, so, well, i feel, i think, in addition, kind of, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40583554377 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42887120282 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445623342175 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 537.3 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0864957556 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2777777778 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9444444444 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61111111111 5.45110844103 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29012537249 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978964107002 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664477855658 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191074141463 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468084730608 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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