Work for an employer or own a business (pref)
Throughout the history of mankind, and consequently in the modern society, people have had to work to earn a living, or for some other reasons. However, the dilemma is whether to work for an employer or to own self business. It goes without mentioning that different people with discrepancies in backgrounds, insights, and levels of education might hold miscellaneous perspectives in this regard. In spite of the fact that a concrete argument can be made to advocate working for someone else, I, on the contrary, have determinate, sufficient reasons to prefer standing by the other view point and support owning a business. My body of reasons and examples are rendered as follows.
Considering the realm of the context, the first advantage that conjures up is about independency. In my point of view, having independency on making decisions about work problems can be considered as a boon, as the feeling on shaping the own future has always been appreciated by me. When the most important decisions which will affect the outcome of the work in a significant manner, are not yours to make, there might not be any joy in the successful results, as you have not contributed to choosing the path which has led to triumph. For example, how can an employee feel good about a considerable increase in the revenue of a large company, when he or she has not played a major role in achieving it? Therefore, I believe, independency is a factor which makes you feel a lot more conducive in procurement of accomplishment; thus, it can be deemed as a real privilege.
Secondly, when a person owns the business, obviously, there is more responsibility associated with the job, a situation which I deeply admire and have always praised. The point is, more responsibility will lead to more dedication and commitment to work, and apparently will bring the best out of the person, thus, the outcome can be expected to be more consummate. For instance postulate a person who is employed in a company, in this situation he is not responsible for the success of it, and would not probably do his best , just a mild attitude towards the job is expected depending on the level of the paycheck he is paid. But, on the other hand, if the same person owns the company, all he thinks about is the success of the company, due to the fact that more success is equal to more income. Therefore, the responsibility factor has an impact as well.
Last but not least, owning a business is more interesting and challenging than being employed. Contriving new strategies and solution pertinent to unexpected situations can be fascinating as well as being laborious and grueling.
Admittedly, owning a business can also represents its own drawbacks, more responsibility can be considered as a burden as well, stresses and pressures imposed by everyday work, and depending of the income on the success of the business are all some disadvantages at some extents. While, on the contrary, an employee is not encountered with these mentioned problem and will have his or her routine schedule.
With all the above being claimed, and when contemplating over all influential factors, I am left to draw one single conclusion. In the case of owning a business advantages like more independency, more possible income, and being more challenging are all reasons to make pros carry more weight over cons. Therefore, I prefer to have my own business rather than being employed and work for someone else.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a significant manner" with adverb for "significant"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ich will affect the outcome of the work in a significant manner, are not yours to make, there might not...
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Line 7, column 525, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...f it, and would not probably do his best , just a mild attitude towards the job is...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'apparently', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'as well as', 'in spite of', 'on the contrary', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.208708708709 0.229887763892 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.171171171171 0.158761421928 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0750750750751 0.0866891130778 87% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0585585585586 0.046263068375 127% => OK
Pronouns: 0.036036036036 0.0685040099705 53% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117117117117 0.118717715034 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0720720720721 0.0351676179071 205% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.97603164513 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.027027027027 0.0309702414327 87% => OK
Particles: 0.0015015015015 0.00188951952338 79% => OK
Determiners: 0.115615615616 0.0887237588012 130% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0225225225225 0.0209618222197 107% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0165165165165 0.0139019557991 119% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3507.0 2387.08602151 147% => OK
No of words: 595.0 408.028673835 146% => OK
Chars per words: 5.89411764706 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93888872473 4.48200974243 110% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.329411764706 0.338922669872 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.272268907563 0.251872472559 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.221848739496 0.174417080927 127% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.13781512605 0.112833075102 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97603164513 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 285.0 212.727598566 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478991596639 0.524397521467 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 58.5842149622 59.2087087015 99% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0454545455 20.5533526081 132% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4959684226 48.84282405 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.409090909 120.699889404 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0454545455 20.5533526081 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.909090909091 0.644075263715 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.5376344086 154% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 54.2723453018 45.7405998639 119% => OK
Elegance: 1.49717514124 1.45489161554 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242693405315 0.300154397459 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.128339379577 0.103427244359 124% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.102219296314 0.0752933317313 136% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.589921450848 0.497263757937 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.172090260503 0.151897553556 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11599652549 0.114077575197 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143692056238 0.0781384742642 184% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.296616914039 0.336927656856 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.135316737053 0.067059652881 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206548373792 0.210909579961 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143084279692 0.0618886996521 231% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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