Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. which view do you agree with?
It has long been a hot controversy among contemporary researchers about effects of Internet. I think, answering to this question is imperative as it deals with the most important technology in our days. As far as I am concerned, the Internet is definitely a useful technology.
The first plain reason for my propensity that accessing to a lot of information by ordinary people can be useful. For example, I remember three years ago when a fired employee revealed the huge payments and rewards of bank managers in my country by Internet, it caused a useful debate over the payments which resulted in finding more frauds in the country. Another example, I remember there was a prison break in my town; The police used a social web application for warning the people because of the popularity of Internet these days.
The second reason that I should mention is that it is the best way to get information for students and professors in universities and research centers.For instance, according to a research which was conducted by one of the most reputable universities in my country, the resources of over eighty percent of papers come from the Internet. Also, I used some unique websites as my primary source for writing my thesis in master degree. I cannot imagine writing a paper in a journal without the Internet.
The last and most important reason is that information plays the most important role for success in the modern world. As the English proverb goes, knowledge is power. A prime example from my own experience may shed some light to this point, I remember, two years ago when I had a job interview with one of the best information technology companies in my country, I found the questions of interview from previous job candidates, and it was very useful for my job interview.
To conclude, considering the above reasons, the Internet is like an endless book. The huge information in this endless book is useful in so many cases.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i think']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.260989010989 0.229887763892 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.123626373626 0.158761421928 78% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0934065934066 0.0866891130778 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0357142857143 0.046263068375 77% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0686813186813 0.0685040099705 100% => OK
Prepositions: 0.148351648352 0.118717715034 125% => OK
Participles: 0.0302197802198 0.0351676179071 86% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.84071068657 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0164835164835 0.0309702414327 53% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.120879120879 0.0887237588012 136% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.010989010989 0.0209618222197 52% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.010989010989 0.0139019557991 79% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1943.0 2387.08602151 81% => OK
No of words: 333.0 408.028673835 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83483483483 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.369369369369 0.338922669872 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.279279279279 0.251872472559 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.21021021021 0.174417080927 121% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.138138138138 0.112833075102 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84071068657 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531531531532 0.524397521467 101% => OK
Word variations: 56.2321026333 59.2087087015 95% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 23.7857142857 20.5533526081 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.8696592012 48.84282405 182% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 138.785714286 120.699889404 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7857142857 20.5533526081 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.644075263715 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 51.7136422136 45.7405998639 113% => OK
Elegance: 1.92771084337 1.45489161554 132% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230840793563 0.300154397459 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.109850991654 0.103427244359 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0726685343217 0.0752933317313 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.59606063234 0.497263757937 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.163244178092 0.151897553556 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975454449354 0.114077575197 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530481117569 0.0781384742642 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.351194225789 0.336927656856 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.122969658133 0.067059652881 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148586562469 0.210909579961 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258109643775 0.0618886996521 42% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.6433691756 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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