Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Society to be successful need to conversant people. I think the Internet provides people with a valuable information for a few reasons. The share of information and knowledge and the connection between human in different place can be some of my reasons. Everyone know internet is a good source for answering to questions. If someone is away from family or friends, can speak and see them very easy by helping internet. This essay has explained why I agree that Internet provides with a lot of valuable information.
A doctor, teacher, sportsman and so on can share their knowledge, experience and information with another people by using Internet. Therefore everybody who has learned to use internet can find out an answer to what has made a question for him or her. For example, I love learning about psychology. Internet has helped me to learn about it. Now I know how to behave when a child cry or when a person is sad and so on. Now I know I must be careful that I don’t mentally harm somebody.
The Internet provides condition that people can display real news about what happens in the world or they can advertise their produces and goods. Also they can see and speak with family and friends and so forth from different places. My own experience is a good example of this. I remember when I was a researcher in a robotic group I had an emergency session. I was in one other city and my presence was necessary. Internet and Skype helped me and I could have participated in my meeting.
However there are lie, fiction, bad and private information in the Internet and even sometimes extreme information about a subject that they can create problem for people but the Internet saves money and time and can provide good, positive and real information such as what has been said in this essay. Therefore I agree with this sentence that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, even so, for example, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70447761194 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69040521866 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519402985075 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6590289171 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281226069675 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906418475327 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115018328079 0.0737576698707 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191072868739 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872996700088 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.