Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think that access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Why? Use specific reason and details to explain your idea.
The Internet has given people the information that they have never exprienced before. This brilliant invention has raised a lot of debates. Some people claime this access of information makes a wide range of problems in new society. However, others, as I do, believe that the information which are avaliable on the internet are worthwhile. I feel this way for a couple of reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, the information on the Internet can help people to increase their health and improve their liftestyle. There are a wide variety of websites and social media pages that provide a lot of information about healthcare. People by checking out such pages can gain a far deeper understanding about their health and liftestyle. My own experience is a compelling example of this. Last year my father has a pain on his chest, he looked pretty well on the surface but after searching on the Internet and gaining a little bit information about such pains and its relation with probable heart attack. Based on the information which gained on the Internet, my father decided to go for his doctor for more assists. He was fortunate because his pain was a sign of his cardiovascular disease which his doctore realized. Had my father did not access to the Internet and its data, He has unable predicted his disease and protected herself.
Secondly, having information can help people to be more aware of their environment. These days our world is changing in the fast pace and knowing abour latest news is critical. By cheking out the news, people can update themselvs about events all over the glob. For instance, yesterday, while I checked news and realized that the Iranian currancy "Rial" loos its value against US dollar. It was very crucial to me because I need US dollar for abroad travelling. By knowin this fact I decided to buy some dollar and saving my money.
In conclusion, it is an undeniable fact that the Internet and the information which it provides is vital for people and can help them in many ways. It can halp people to improve their lifestyle and get awarness about events.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 518, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...searching on the Internet and gaining a little bit information about such pains and its re...
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Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'abour the latest'.
Suggestion: abour the latest
...s changing in the fast pace and knowing abour latest news is critical. By cheking out the ne...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, while, as for, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83606557377 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70668375332 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53825136612 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1138737109 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2857142857 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4285714286 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203497760096 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643485262966 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500671812657 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135180390233 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540392449612 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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