Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think that access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Why? Use specific reason and details to explain your idea.
The Internet has given people the information on a level that they have never experienced before. The availability of information which this brilliant invention has provided, raises a lot of debates. Some people argue that this access of data makes a wide range of problems. However, others, as I do, believe that the information which are worthwhile. I feel this way for a couple of reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, the information on the Internet can help people to increase their health and improve their lifestyle. There are a wide variety of websites and social media that provide a lot of information about healthcare. People by checking out such pages can gain a far deeper understanding about their healthcare and the improvement of their life. My own experience is a compelling example of this. Last year my father has a pain on his chest, he looked pretty well on the surface but after searching on the Internet he gained some information about such pains and their relationship with probable heart attack. Therefore, Based on the information which gained on the Internet, my father decided to go for his doctor for more assists. He was fortunate because his pain was a sign of his cardiovascular disease which his doctor realized at his first stage. Had my father did not access to the Internet and such data, He has unable predicted his disease and protected herself.
Secondly, being knowledgeability can help people to be more aware of their environment and make wise decision for their future. These days our world is changing in the fast pace and knowing about latest news is critical. By checking out the news and getting knowledge about the events happened around us, people can update their information about events all over the globe. For instance, last week, I checked news and realized that the Iranian currency (Rial) loos its value against US dollar. It was very crucial to me because I need US dollar for my study plan in abroad. By knowing this fact I decided to buy some dollar and saving my money.
In conclusion, it is an undeniable fact that the Internet and the information which it provides is vital for people and can help them in many ways. It can help people to improve their lifestyle and get awareness about events.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'about the latest'.
Suggestion: about the latest
...s changing in the fast pace and knowing about latest news is critical. By checking out the n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, as for, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1898.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81725888325 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67615734496 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517766497462 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7643834733 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.380952381 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7619047619 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189957859764 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06474027599 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503322212415 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133741290472 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615066601303 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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