A controversial debate is raised the best place to exercise. Some groups of people may hold the view that is better to practice outdoors. However, some others may hold a different view and feel that is better to practice indoors. In my vantage point, i feel it is better to practice indoors for the several reasons which are elaborated in my essay
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that people can exercise indoors all over the year. Although exercising outdoors may give the person an opportunity to enjoy the nature, it can not be done all over the year because in cold whether conditions people do not feel that they want to exercise. A vivid example which can shed light on my point view is the whether conditions this winter season. Unconventionally, this winter season was super cold, therefore, many people who are used to practice outsides where not able to do so. Thus, they did not have an opportunity to exercise.
The second, point which deserves some words is that practicing indoors provides a motive for people to work harder. When I see lots of people jogging in the gym, I feel enthusiastic to do more. Thus it gives a motive to go the extra mile. However, when I practice outdoors all by myself. I feel bored, and I can hardly continue an hour of exercise. Thus, I prefer indoor activities.
Although the aforementioned reasons are the first to cross my mind, they are by no means the only reasons available. In fact, there is another subtle point that is worth to be mentioned. The noteworthy refreshing, intelligible study that was published in the American Journal of athletes which concluded the people who are practicing in the gym are twice more energetic than their peers. This study was conducted on people from different states to prevent any bias.
To wrap up, contemplating all the aforementioned reason one soon releases that it is better to practice indoors. Practicing indoors provides a motive for people to go the extra mile. Moreover, it is a habit that people get used to it, thus they can do it all over the year.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, i feel, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76454293629 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6997923992 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468144044321 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.6694096266 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9047619048 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1904761905 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7619047619 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180640887623 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525325810301 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497116890543 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101827425785 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364869634257 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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