Some people think that can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and develop your essay.
A Leader can be a person that leading a small company or a president of a country. They have a great impact on their jobholders. I am of the opinion that there are two main characteristics of a good boss, which are great communication skills and his professionalism. I will explore these two factors in the following essay.
To begin with, having a good relationship with employs is a significant principle for a supervisor. In a company, bosses have to interact with different people who have their unique personality and it is crucial that supervisors can handle them. Not only that, but it is notable that they have well communication with the CEO from other companies because it is necessary for growing their business. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I graduated from university my professor suggested me a position in his company which was related to my field of study. After a while of working, I found that his manner was in contrast to my opinion which previously mentioned. He interacted with his co-worker like a teacher in a class in which the employees had to listen and do their tasks, as a result, I can see the lack of confidence and focus on my colleagues. He could not lead his employs and company as a supervisor, because he could not make a nice relation between his members and co-worker in other corporation. This experience demonstrates how necessary bosses’ communication skills can be.
Moreover, I feel that the professionalism is crucial for a boss, having a professional leader is a feeling of trust for the jobholders. They know this fact he can manage the firm as well as possible. Professional bosses have a lot of valuable experiences that I could learn from them. In addition, their knowledge and skills make them a reliable person. My friend’s experience is a compelling example of what I mean. Last year my friend was hired (applied for) in a computer software developing company. He always told me about his work and his excellent boss with a great enthusiasm and I can see his strong desire for success. He has always inspired and learned new things from his supervisor. It was obvious that his boss was excellent who improved his employees’ performance and motivated them. It confirms this fact that being expert for a boss is a remarkable attribute which conducts their employs and companies to being prosperous.
In conclusion, supervisors’ roles at the company are so significant. They have a major impact not only on their firm but also on their workers. So, I believe that having experiences and being expert in communication both are a substantial need for the bosses in which they can improve their business and their colleagues’ performance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 450, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rience is a compelling example of this. When I graduated from university my professo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, i feel, i mean, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, as well as, in contrast to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 77.0 43.0788530466 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2277.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 463.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91792656587 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16617851759 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4686825054 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 708.3 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.333468537 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5769230769 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8076923077 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11538461538 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121800966266 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0376159128655 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326853887605 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773109752617 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322936824914 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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