Some people think governments should spend as much money as possible exploring outer space (for example, traveling to the Moon and to other planets). Other people disagree and think governments should spend this money for our basic needs on Earth. Which of these two opinions do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
The importance of developing the ways of facilitating human’s lives, found on Earth or other planets, is crystal clear to everyone. These days, science and technology have been improved in such a way, that is not impossible to imagine traveling and exploring other planets, like it used to be. If I was asked to make a decision about whether governments should spend money on Earth or on outer space, for that matter, I would definitely choose the later one for two important reasons.
The first reason is that we might find another planet, for future generation, to live in. The more money peopl...
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Hi,
Thank you for the evaluation. I have one question in mind. Does the 3 point subtracted only for 1 spelling and 1 grammatical error?
No, it is about the overall
No, it is about the overall performance not the errors.
well, thank you. Could you
well, thank you. Could you also give me some tips on how can I improve my writing to get closer to 30? I mean in what areas do you think I should work more? based on this essay or others that I have submitted so far.
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Not only will they uncover another planet for the living of future generation, but also will find a solution
Not only will they uncover another planet for the living of future generation, but also they will find a solution
Although it is a movie, but as you can see
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Sentence: So NASA, an organization which is supported by government, prepared facilities and utilized expertises like engineers, astronauts, and scientists to explore nine other planets to maybe find the one that is suitable to initiate a life on.
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Score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 442 350
No. of Characters: 2114 1500
No. of Different Words: 231 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.585 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.783 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.566 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 142 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 99 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 65 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 50 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27.625 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.511 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.688 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.326 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.521 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.105 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5