Some people think it is the best approach for students to learn if school start the day at a early time in the morning. But someone think the school should start the day at late time. Which one do you prefer? Use specific reasons and detailed examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, education not only plays an essential role in the growth of children, but also have a great impact on their career selection. Though everyone knows the significance of education, some parents point out that school should start at an early time in the morning, as their children can gain more knowledge. From my perspective, this opinion is not pretty smart.
First of all, students will feel tired if they go to school too early. After an exhausting day, everyone needs release pressure. Only if you entirely relax yourself, you will certainly feel energetic in the following day. Nevertheless, if your sweet dream is interupted by annoying alarm, you cannot concentrate on what your teacher say during the whole day. Especially in Asian schools, students are required to learn a lots of knowledge. They are buried in countless assignments and endless exams every day. Suppose that their school time is still extended, what feeling they will have? In order to improve the efficiency of them, I disagree with it.
Besides, Parents cannot take care of them well if the time is changed. For parents have their own schedule, they cannot get up as early as their children, so that they are not able to prepare fresh and delicious breakfast for them as well. Children have to eat some sandwiches or bread their parents bought yesterday. If they eat only a kind of food in the morning for a long time, such an ill-balanced meal will cause some serious diseases. For instance, about one year ago, my friend Eric led a similar life. They were asked to appear at the classroom at 6:30 am. However, his parents got up at 9:00 every day. Thus, he had to eat instant noodles every morning. After a semester, he had a stomach ache. Inevitably, he was sent to the hospital. Doctor told him that he was supposed to eat more kinds of food in order to take in various nutrient. He adopted doctor's suggestion and finally he recoverd.
Admittedly, if a school start early in the morning, students will have more time to study and teachers will tell them more knowledge as well. However, it only increases the volume of knowledge, but ignores the quality. So, why not end the school later in the evening? On one hand, students have higher efficiency. On the other hand, parents will care for them more carefully.
So that's why I oppose the proposal of starting school earlier.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, thus, well, for instance, kind of, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1968.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52817084642 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556097560976 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4898480115 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8620689655 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1379310345 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8275862069 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236478440321 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565282862296 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053869636615 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136310252351 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.01718092782 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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