Some people trust their first impressions about a person's character because they believe these judgments are generally correct. Other people do not judge a person's character quickly because they believe first impressions are often wrong. Compare these two attitudes. Which attitude do you agree with? Support your choice with specific examples.
In today’s world, people tend to be in contact with each other less than the past. This phenomenon is due to the new improvements and new technologies. Thus, discerning others character is becoming a significant issue. Even though some people trust their first impression about person’s traits, but, in my view, it is not a perfect idea to judge a person immediately. There are two main reasons why I feel this way, which I will explain in the following essay.
To begin with, there is always a chance that people’s first treatments are fake. There is a huge diversity of people in the world, so you should not necessarily be sure about a person’s honesty when meet him or her for the first time. Research on sociology, which was done by University of Western Ontario on June 5, 2003, as a case in point, reveals that 89 percent of people in Toronto are kind of a different person when they encounter with their date, for the first time. What’s more, I used to date a girl, which was a lawyer, and I was passionate about her, because she seemed to be nice person. But, after a while, I figured out that I was wrong. Consequently, people’s first behaviors may not be always true.
Secondly, there is a possibility of having mistake in our judgment about someone when we see him or her for the first time. My older brother, John, who is 29 years old now, and suffering from his wife’s high level of anger, is always telling me that he is not satisfied of his life, and if he had a possibility to come back and change this status, he would definitely choose his wife carefully this time, and not by merely her first treatments.
Although some other sociologists are approved of this kind of judgments, and assert that they are usually true, but, taking into account all the factors mentioned, it is better not to judge people by your first impression about them. And I, personally, as sociology student, agree with the latter point of view.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'thus', 'while', 'i feel', 'kind of', 'in my view', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.208920187793 0.229887763892 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.119718309859 0.158761421928 75% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0774647887324 0.0866891130778 89% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0539906103286 0.046263068375 117% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0798122065728 0.0685040099705 117% => OK
Prepositions: 0.119718309859 0.118717715034 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0211267605634 0.0351676179071 60% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74698816562 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.018779342723 0.0309702414327 61% => OK
Particles: 0.00234741784038 0.00188951952338 124% => OK
Determiners: 0.0704225352113 0.0887237588012 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0093896713615 0.0209618222197 45% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0211267605634 0.0139019557991 152% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2000.0 2387.08602151 84% => OK
No of words: 348.0 408.028673835 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74712643678 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.287356321839 0.338922669872 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.198275862069 0.251872472559 79% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.135057471264 0.174417080927 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.114942528736 0.112833075102 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74698816562 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580459770115 0.524397521467 111% => OK
Word variations: 65.8466977312 59.2087087015 111% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6684587814 73% => OK
Sentence length: 23.2 20.5533526081 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.4854670291 48.84282405 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.333333333 120.699889404 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.5533526081 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.933333333333 0.644075263715 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 43.0275862069 45.7405998639 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.37962962963 1.45489161554 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236703716242 0.300154397459 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0846623424143 0.103427244359 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0576929171218 0.0752933317313 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.484842404611 0.497263757937 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.177955811135 0.151897553556 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940998260933 0.114077575197 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744450033003 0.0781384742642 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.274315767234 0.336927656856 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0423453058839 0.067059652881 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156888044503 0.210909579961 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06566054945 0.0618886996521 106% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8870967742 50% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.6433691756 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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