Some universities require students to take classes in many subjects. Other universities require students to specialize in one subject. Which is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, it is extremely hard to study well in a good university. Some universities require students to take classes in many subjects, but other universities require students to specialize in one subject. I, however, think that the universities should request students to specialize in one subject because they can save time, save money and reduce stress. Firstly, taking classes in one subject is preferable, as a result of saving students’ time. If students study many subjects they have to do too much homework, and it can cost the student lots of time to do that. On the other hand, when they focus on a subject, they just have to do only the homework for that subject. Thus, they do not waste time on the subject they that not necessary for them to graduate. Instead of that, they can concentrate on their major or spend more time with their family or their friends.
Secondly, I assume that specializing in a subject is better; therefore, they can save money. Today, everything costs a lot of money and the cost of many subjects’ classes is not the exception. The cost of the books may be totally high so that if you work on one subject, you can save much money for your family.
Finally, the students will have less stress when they attend in a subject’s class. In order to have a great grade in the classes, they have to work extremely hard. They need to spend time reading books, do their homework carefully and do a lot of research. Hence, if they take part in many subjects, they have to work much harder so they can easily get stressed. Therefore, they can decrease their stress if they try to work well in a subject.
In conclusion, I think the universities should let students choose one major subject to learn because of their time, their money and their stress.
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'i think', 'in conclusion', 'as a result', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.203910614525 0.229887763892 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.159217877095 0.158761421928 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0642458100559 0.0866891130778 74% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0642458100559 0.046263068375 139% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0921787709497 0.0685040099705 135% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117318435754 0.118717715034 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0111731843575 0.0351676179071 32% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.55624911731 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0391061452514 0.0309702414327 126% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0698324022346 0.0887237588012 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0307262569832 0.0209618222197 147% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00558659217877 0.0139019557991 40% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1787.0 2387.08602151 75% => OK
No of words: 316.0 408.028673835 77% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65506329114 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.284810126582 0.338922669872 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.224683544304 0.251872472559 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.158227848101 0.174417080927 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0949367088608 0.112833075102 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55624911731 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 212.727598566 66% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446202531646 0.524397521467 85% => OK
Word variations: 43.8673649988 59.2087087015 74% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 18.5882352941 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.3627924102 48.84282405 48% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.117647059 120.699889404 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5882352941 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.05882352941 0.644075263715 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 41.0565897245 45.7405998639 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.05309734513 1.45489161554 72% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367598226039 0.300154397459 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.163668589274 0.103427244359 158% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0975882790924 0.0752933317313 130% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.547364058753 0.497263757937 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.168774981074 0.151897553556 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167640530212 0.114077575197 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15841670052 0.0781384742642 203% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.276065524577 0.336927656856 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0687311973826 0.067059652881 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23744405538 0.210909579961 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104114985645 0.0618886996521 168% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
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Rates: 70 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21 Out of 30
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