Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
It goes without saying that our families play an important role in our lives so many young adults would rather live with their family for a longer time. However, others people think that it would be a better idea for children to be independent of their parents as soon as they can. I am of the latter opinion. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First and foremost, by becoming independent, the youth would be more responsible and prepare better to live alone in the future. No matter how old they are, they all have to move out of our parents’ house sooner or later to go to the university or to start their own families. Consequently, they must acquire all the skills needed to live on their own. Moreover, their parents are not always there to take care of them. There is no better way to do that than to be independent at a young age. My own experience is a good example to illustrate this. When I was ten years old, I started to learn to become more self-reliant. I was taught the fundamental skills such as cooking meals or doing the laundry. As a result, I didn’t have a hard time familiarizing myself with the life in university which many of my friends had.
Furthermore, if the young people really love their parents, they ought not to always bother them and not to rely on them too much, instead, they should learn to be independent of them. Unfortunately, parents are getting older day by day. Their aging results in continual tiredness and occasional sickness. Making them take care of their children only causes them to be more stressful and tired. Therefore, young adults should let their parents have time to relax and enjoy their lives by being independent of them. For example, my parents, who are aging, tend to be tired now and then so I don’t want them to worry about me too much. Since I went to the university and lead an independent life, my parents have had more time together and for relaxation because my dad doesn’t have to take me to school every day and my mom doesn’t need to tidy my room every morning like they used to do. Without me at home, they are able to go on vacations more often and they won’t ever be stressed out because of worrying about me since they know that I can live on my own.
In conclusion, I truly believe that a young adult should live independently of their parents. Independence would teach children to well-prepare to live alone. In addition, children shouldn’t bother parents too much so that they can enjoy their lives.
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Discourse Markers used:
['consequently', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'really', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'well', 'for example', 'i feel', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.164356435644 0.229887763892 71% => OK
Verbs: 0.176237623762 0.158761421928 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0811881188119 0.0866891130778 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0811881188119 0.046263068375 175% => OK
Pronouns: 0.118811881188 0.0685040099705 173% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.10495049505 0.118717715034 88% => OK
Participles: 0.029702970297 0.0351676179071 84% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.55848938312 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0554455445545 0.0309702414327 179% => OK
Particles: 0.0019801980198 0.00188951952338 105% => OK
Determiners: 0.0554455445545 0.0887237588012 62% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0257425742574 0.0209618222197 123% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00990099009901 0.0139019557991 71% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2568.0 2387.08602151 108% => OK
No of words: 459.0 408.028673835 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59477124183 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.263616557734 0.338922669872 78% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.183006535948 0.251872472559 73% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.128540305011 0.174417080927 74% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0871459694989 0.112833075102 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55848938312 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503267973856 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 57.719706544 59.2087087015 97% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 19.125 20.5533526081 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3375929489 48.84282405 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 120.699889404 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.5533526081 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.708333333333 0.644075263715 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 37.4256535948 45.7405998639 82% => OK
Elegance: 0.794736842105 1.45489161554 55% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34633810428 0.300154397459 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.095813469323 0.103427244359 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0661326750668 0.0752933317313 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.445031465676 0.497263757937 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.139651742555 0.151897553556 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117678504398 0.114077575197 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616496788719 0.0781384742642 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.369006687621 0.336927656856 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.11161719566 0.067059652881 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242934077301 0.210909579961 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373422091698 0.0618886996521 60% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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