Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Every young adult will grow and live apart from their parents to form their own families. The ages for those young adults to be independent depends on each person. Some people may have to live longer with their parents and some others may not. This essay will discuss the issue of independent life and live with their families for a longer time.
Most young adults prefer to have a separate or independent life from their parents or families as soon as possible. This is because they have a strong urge for freedom in doing what they desire. But in fact, many of them fail. This should not be surprising since often they are actually not ready mentally although they are physically ready. It is widely understood that to live independently requires a lot of energy and is not easy at all. In this twenty-first century, people may need more and more preparation because the competition is increasing rapidly. An observation shows that many University graduated students are unemployed. Therefore, they will not be able to support and fulfill their necessities.
So living independently at an early age is not suitable for all young adults, some young adults may need to take more time to prepare themselves before going out to struggle. Young adults need to be ready to support themselves. Taking time to get more education and living with their families for a longer time may lead them to a better independent life because they will be well prepared for the hard-life outside. Still, living with their families for *too* long will not be a good idea because they could get used to it and tend to be less independent.
The time to live independently depends on the person himself. He or she must decide whether they are ready to leave their parents to have an independent life or not. The decision will vary from one person to another. A person should judge that he is capable of fulfilling his needs without being independent on his parents; this indicates that he is ready for his independent life. Otherwise, he might need to stay longer with his parents.
Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'well', 'apart from', 'in fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.150649350649 0.229887763892 66% => OK
Verbs: 0.168831168831 0.158761421928 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.124675324675 0.0866891130778 144% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0701298701299 0.046263068375 152% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0857142857143 0.0685040099705 125% => OK
Prepositions: 0.111688311688 0.118717715034 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0233766233766 0.0351676179071 66% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.57427388763 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0519480519481 0.0309702414327 168% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0831168831169 0.0887237588012 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0415584415584 0.0209618222197 198% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0025974025974 0.0139019557991 19% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2066.0 2387.08602151 87% => OK
No of words: 357.0 408.028673835 87% => OK
Chars per words: 5.78711484594 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.294117647059 0.338922669872 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.212885154062 0.251872472559 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.151260504202 0.174417080927 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0952380952381 0.112833075102 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57427388763 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473389355742 0.524397521467 90% => OK
Word variations: 49.0771512774 59.2087087015 83% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5533526081 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8347146788 48.84282405 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.380952381 120.699889404 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.5533526081 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.52380952381 0.644075263715 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 38.2885154062 45.7405998639 84% => OK
Elegance: 0.88 1.45489161554 60% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377779300002 0.300154397459 126% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.102973268763 0.103427244359 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.116424920144 0.0752933317313 155% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.460513768159 0.497263757937 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.137808002876 0.151897553556 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138627225877 0.114077575197 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0969962578673 0.0781384742642 124% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.305042367094 0.336927656856 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0305205277039 0.067059652881 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270608962279 0.210909579961 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856614236087 0.0618886996521 138% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8870967742 50% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.91756272401 203% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 8.42114695341 47% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 10.0 2.75985663082 362% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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