Although some people would choose to live separately from their parents, I prefer living together with my family. The key factors which determine if a person would choose to live with or without their family are bonding and understanding. If a person has a good bonding and understanding with their parents, they would never decide to settle in a separate place. There are several reasons for living together with family.
First of all, it deepens the bonding between our us and our parents. As we get older we mature and we can relate to our family better. For instance, when I was a kid, my parents always told to study, however, I didn't understand why my parents forced me so hard to study. But, now after I have matured a bit I can relate to why they insisted on studying. Living with family also have perks, for instance, you always have someone to share your worries and problems with. On the other hand, if you are living alone you don't have anyone or anyone mature to share your problems and relax your mind.
Moreover, living with family can help you to always be on the right path and even help to come back to the right path if you have deviated. For example, when I was living separately from my parents, when I was in high school, I got into bad habits like drinking and smoking due to the influence of my friend circle. However, after I returned home after completing my high school, my parents helped me to get back on the right track and eventually, I was able to leave all those habits behind.
In conclusion, I would prefer living with my family because i want to maintain the bonding and the understanding that I have with my family. Furthermore, my family would never let me follow the wrong path. Due to these reasons, I would prefer living with my family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53250773994 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3962968296 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470588235294 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 463.5 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3462331103 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211221358299 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082228994845 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581903431113 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136063797378 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507073841458 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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