Specialize in one field or gain knowledge in different subjects.
People have different opinions whether they should have broad knowledge in different subjects or to specialize in a specific subject. In my opinion, it is better to specialize in one field rather than gaining knowledge about many discipline. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in this essay.
First of all, We all agree that one of the main goals to seek knowledge is to find a job with a good salary, and people who are experts in a specific field can find job opportunities easier than those who have knowledge in different area. Specialization will not only enable the person to find a job easily but also provide him with a high salary that will let him enjoying his life. When we talk about job we should consider that most companies are specialized in specific area or fields. To demonstrate this point, consider an IT companies, There are no one IT company that focus on both programming and networking at the same time. So, what benefits can person get by gaining solid and deep knowledge in both fields, programming and knowledge?. Since he will work only in one field. Computer engineers fresh graduates are a good example since they have a knowledge in different areas of computer including programming, hardware architecture and networking. But after graduation they are struggling finding jobs because they fail to answer questions that is related to only one specific fields in job interviews.
Secondly, I read a study that states that people who are focusing on one field are more successful than those who seek knowledge on different fields. The study argues that human mind and memory are prepared to understand and memorize information that is related to one subjects. On the other hand, the performance of the mind is lower than expected when it comes to learning about different subjects. My life is an example of this. In the first year at the university, I struggled a lot while studying courses, because some of these courses were related to math, while others related to computer hardware. after become a senior student. All courses were related to computer. As a result, I was more comfortable studying these course and I got higher marks.
To sum up, I endorse the idea that specialization in one subject is better than having knowledge about different subjects. this because specialization make it easy to find job opportunity with high salary, and because human mind compatibility of specialization is more than it is communicability with diversity of fields.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, while, i feel, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2094.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 423.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95035460993 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85356793458 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482269503546 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 671.4 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2031909426 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7142857143 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392469778034 0.236089414692 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109470364734 0.076458572812 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107138675008 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255893654214 0.150856017488 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607152197225 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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