Students at universities often have a choice of places to live. They may choose to live in university dormitories, or they may choose to live in apartments in the community. Compare the advantages of living in university housing with the advantages of living in an apartment in the community. Where would you prefer to live? Give reasons for your preference
Nowadays, all universities in around the world require the student to choose a suitable place to live before they start their study. Some people prefer living in apartments in the community to living in university dormitories. I, on the other hand, think that living in the dormitory is better because it has good security, it gives students have an opportunity to interact with other students and it brings up the convenience for students.
Firstly, living in a dormitory is preferable; as a result, it is safer for most students. It may have many items to keep the students in the best security. Cameras, fire alarms, fire extinguishers are the best examples of the protection devices. Besides, there are many people who may be teachers, lifeguards, and students near the dormitory, they can help you whenever you are in troubles.
Secondly, students in the dormitory can have more interaction with other students. Some universities request scholar to live with one or two others in a room. So they not only can learn about another culture if they live with an international student but also can broaden their knowledge about other countries. Furthermore, they also can share their study experience with other people and help other roommates in studying; it can improve their grade at school.
Finally, it is extremely convenient for all students who live on campus. They do not have to look for a good apartment or they do not need to buy furniture for their new houses. In the dormitory, it has adequacy appliance, so that they must not waste their time and money on them. In addition, students can eat at the dining room in the dormitory; therefore, it is really helpful to many people who cannot make the meal.
In conclusion, l believe that student should live in the university dormitory because of the security, the convenience, and the opportunity that the dormitory brings to us
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'really', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'as a result', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.236111111111 0.229887763892 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.141666666667 0.158761421928 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0583333333333 0.0866891130778 67% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0444444444444 0.046263068375 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0777777777778 0.0685040099705 114% => OK
Prepositions: 0.136111111111 0.118717715034 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0138888888889 0.0351676179071 39% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.79135607079 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0277777777778 0.0309702414327 90% => OK
Particles: 0.00277777777778 0.00188951952338 147% => OK
Determiners: 0.0916666666667 0.0887237588012 103% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0333333333333 0.0209618222197 159% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00833333333333 0.0139019557991 60% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1895.0 2387.08602151 79% => OK
No of words: 319.0 408.028673835 78% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.94043887147 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.332288401254 0.338922669872 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.266457680251 0.251872472559 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.206896551724 0.174417080927 119% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.153605015674 0.112833075102 136% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79135607079 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498432601881 0.524397521467 95% => OK
Word variations: 50.5630774216 59.2087087015 85% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 19.9375 20.5533526081 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4861087288 48.84282405 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.4375 120.699889404 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9375 20.5533526081 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1875 0.644075263715 184% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 46.5832680251 45.7405998639 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.46315789474 1.45489161554 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.499689209716 0.300154397459 166% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.138489322761 0.103427244359 134% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0726817851492 0.0752933317313 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.562984307657 0.497263757937 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.155565031786 0.151897553556 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.204126729476 0.114077575197 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112667478051 0.0781384742642 144% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.297055859205 0.336927656856 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0853948149885 0.067059652881 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.33135427547 0.210909579961 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0835653386034 0.0618886996521 135% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
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Rates: 83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25 Out of 30
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