In today's world, there is a subconscious inter-dependence between countries, workers in an organization, students in a school, etc. This boils down to our individual lives, dependence on others is a reflex action.
Take a football team for instance, individual players in a team have to co-operate with others in order to achieve corporate goals like the World Cup. In the football team, when one player begins to act independently, by being selfish, other players criticize his actions. A player is supposed to be able to accept such criticisms and work on his faults. This applies to our everyday life. We are being criticized by our peers, co-workers, and parents virtually everyday.
However, failure to accept criticisms creates a fix. A person who refuses to acknowledge his/her faults can be correctly depicted as being self-centered. No closely-knitted family wants an egoist, no company wants to employ an egomaniac, the society as a whole, abhors egocentrism. Consequently, a person with no family members, no friends, and no job cannot be described as being successful.
In addition, such fellow can also be described as being adamant. An adamant student finds it really difficult to work with others as a team. He sticks to his own opinions and is unwilling to view things from the perspectives of fellow team mates. As a team leader, such a person tends to take irrational decisions.
It is very obvious that a person who refuses to accept criticisms from others cannot succeed owing to his/her faults of self-orientedness and obstinacy.
Can you please kindly explain
Can you please kindly explain what you mean by the white space rule?
Don't put a space before
Don't put a space before punctuation marks.
Always put a space after punctuation marks.
Don't need spaces at the beginning of a paragraph.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...kers, and parents virtually everyday. However, failure to accept criticisms cr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, really, so, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 253.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14624505929 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15707117069 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577075098814 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4621404538 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.375 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8125 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249532443883 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802840271868 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802191475289 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143840964459 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0993579410187 0.0645574589148 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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