Technology designed to make people’s lives simpler makes people’s lives more complicated, A/D
There is no denying, I daresay, technology is playing and will keep playing an indispensable role in people’s life. And there are always different voices toward the topic whether technology makes the world an easier place to live in or not. From my point of view, technology has improved the world’s ease of life.
Firstly, technology changes the landscape of the transportation to a great extent. Back to the dim old days, the smart treasures, airplanes, automobiles, trains and the like, were not used or invented. The transportation depended mainly on horses, cattle and donkeys. It would take a man at least 5 days under a good condition of the roads to go to a place hundreds kilometers away; however, due the emergency of the industrialization, people today only need a few hours to get to the same place. Therefore, it is reasonable to make an inference that technology makes the transportation easier, more comfortable.
Moreover, technology extends the access of the knowledge. In the past, researchers had to pull out off their wanted books from the heavy, dull shelves to find materials for their study, and they had to take the risk of having incomplete or even stained pages, while today’s researchers are much more comfortable. They can find the particular material through online-books network and they just need to type some key words of their wanted books and the books’ title will come onto the screen immediately.
Finally, technology makes it possible for people all around the world to get communication readily. In the past, the mere ways for people to communicate is writing letters, messages took by the third party, and so on. These ways were complicated and low-efficient. Today, in the name of progress, communication is not a barrier between peoples any more. For example, I can phone my overseas uncle or have a FaceTime with him by Skype or Wechat anytime if we both are free and willing to talk. The only thing I need to do is just pressing some buttons.
All in all, it is inconceivable if life is absent of technology. We are enjoying and will keep enjoying the outcome of technology. And it is safe to say that technology has made people’s life simpler and more enjoyable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...that technology makes the transportation easier, more comfortable. Moreover, ...
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Suggestion: keywords
...network and they just need to type some key words of their wanted books and the books&apo...
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Suggestion:
...eople to communicate is writing letters, messages took by the third party, and so...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'third', 'while', 'at least', 'for example', 'to a great extent']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.237020316027 0.229887763892 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.142212189616 0.158761421928 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0902934537246 0.0866891130778 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0496613995485 0.046263068375 107% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0428893905192 0.0685040099705 63% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0925507900677 0.118717715034 78% => OK
Participles: 0.0293453724605 0.0351676179071 83% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.04920415743 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Infinitives: 0.038374717833 0.0309702414327 124% => OK
Particles: 0.00677200902935 0.00188951952338 358% => OK
Determiners: 0.10835214447 0.0887237588012 122% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0135440180587 0.0209618222197 65% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.0139019557991 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2244.0 2387.08602151 94% => OK
No of words: 376.0 408.028673835 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.96808510638 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.308510638298 0.338922669872 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.244680851064 0.251872472559 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.191489361702 0.174417080927 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.135638297872 0.112833075102 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04920415743 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571808510638 0.524397521467 109% => OK
Word variations: 65.8238700011 59.2087087015 111% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.8 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1831825371 48.84282405 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.2 120.699889404 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.7 0.644075263715 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 43.2680851064 45.7405998639 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.52884615385 1.45489161554 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183976088737 0.300154397459 61% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0849018554314 0.103427244359 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0617804364608 0.0752933317313 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.535949558482 0.497263757937 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.14723202857 0.151897553556 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773880272904 0.114077575197 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640346450059 0.0781384742642 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.351346688708 0.336927656856 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0517309385418 0.067059652881 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133278893387 0.210909579961 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308065699597 0.0618886996521 50% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.